Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Overlord: Ancient one

It has potential if you change it, right now it's average You can improve it by Remove first chapter, it's so bad Remove filler or too much info dump Remove wishes or system, give his a telent, bloodline ability or skill If you want him to have tensura skill then say he died in tensura and reincarned in overlord Raphael skill is too op, just give him 3rd rank analysis skill or apraisal skill Don't make it into mmo game simple reincarnation Make the story simple, believable, logical It's not shown where the location is The leveling part is boring, the system is not explained enough His goals for leveling or objective is not clear The time skip seems very random, why bother having him level up just to skip and make him fight the strongest monster? And he kill the death knight easily, how? How the character looks Make him smart Include other characters Explain his character background, past, goals... The paragraphs are too big, split them Fix grammar Don't include emoojis