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PABELO

PABELO

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'Talento é algo que você floresce, instinto é algo que você aprimora'.

2020-11-05 JoinedBrazil
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  • PABELO
    PABELO14min
    Commented

    again dude

    Chapter 5: The Departing Visitors
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    The Silver Monarch of Pirates
    Anime & Comics · alpa_cowsep
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  • PABELO
    PABELO59min
    Commented

    this?

    "That's... the Sword of Damocles of the Silver King." After the light gradually dissipated, he could see what was surrounded by it.
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    The Silver Monarch of Pirates
    Anime & Comics · alpa_cowsep
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  • PABELO
    PABELO1h
    Posted

    This is a bit annoying man, I'm used to having long chapters, when I see a chapter as short as this, it makes me sad to see this.

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    Tower of God: Strongest Axis
    TV · xGodofSwordx
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  • PABELO
    PABELO4h
    Commented

    who is Galio?

    "System, can you let Galio not summon here, and move to another place, come when I let him come over!"
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    People In One Piece: Obtain Ryūjin Jakka At The Start
    Anime & Comics · MiLaDon
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  • PABELO
    PABELO5h
    Replied to PABELO

    So far what I know is a mafia is after his head for being an "heir", but I don't understand why this is in the DXD High School world, is he a human, Demon, Fallen Angel or any other race?

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 Of course
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    DxD: Love has no Limits
    Anime & Comics · Vengeance9578
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  • PABELO
    PABELO5h
    Commented

    So far I don't understand anything, man I hate this mystery, it gives me such agony that I feel like I have to kill someone to know what's happening

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 Of course
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    DxD: Love has no Limits
    Anime & Comics · Vengeance9578
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  • PABELO
    PABELO1d
    Commented
    Seeing this, Orochimaru chuckled and said, "Jiraiya, You are dead,"
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    Multiple Talents in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · Logical_Dot
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  • PABELO
    PABELO1d
    Commented
    Ch 1 Waking up, and master?
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    Sousou no Frieren : As Merlin. (Hiatus)
    Anime & Comics · Vedora_Tempest
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  • PABELO
    PABELO2d
    Commented
    "So, you're finally awake." I spoke.
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    Reborn As Edward Kenway (One Piece Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • PABELO
    PABELO2d
    Commented

    This is a little suspicious my brother, this could be interpreted in many ways, you have no idea what it would be like in the girl's mind hahaahahahahahahahah

    "Yes, I bandaged you up." I said. Before she even asked the question. "As to why I did so, it's simply because I wanted to. Nothing more and nothing less." I explained.
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    Reborn As Edward Kenway (One Piece Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • PABELO
    PABELO3d
    Commented

    Lukas Trowman/Frey Blake is the Main Protagonist of The Great Mage Returns After 4000 Years.

    "I cast magic missile!"
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    Transmigrated into the World of Frieren
    Anime & Comics · Mel0n_Pan
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  • PABELO
    PABELO3d
    Replied to Dummydumdum1
    Somewhere at the outskirt of holy city of Strahl, a petite female elf with green eyes and long white hair tied into two pigtails, long pointed ears twitched and coldly looked south, where she felt a sudden surge of familiar mana and silently muttered something.
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    Transmigrated into the World of Frieren
    Anime & Comics · Mel0n_Pan
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  • PABELO
    PABELO3d
    Replied to LuluViBritania

    Demons just spawn from nothing!

    'if only I was a human! And also where even are my parents?! Why would you leave your 10 year old son alone in the forest at the south lands?! At least give me a reason for abandoning me!'
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    Transmigrated into the World of Frieren
    Anime & Comics · Mel0n_Pan
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  • PABELO
    PABELO3d
    Commented

    You know, you could separate the paragraphs at around 3 to 4 lines per paragraph, it would be much better for reading, and separating the characters' lines also, you know, this gets weird when there are two character lines in the same paragraph, because we won't know who is talking to who. And use these apás ("…") for normal speaking and (..'..) for those who are thinking.

    Ch 2 The First Town
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    One Piece with Creati
    Anime & Comics · Cuchillo
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  • PABELO
    PABELO3d
    Commented

    You know, you could separate the paragraphs at around 3 to 4 lines per paragraph, it would be much better for reading, and separating the characters' lines also, you know, this gets weird when there are two character lines in the same paragraph, because we won't know who is talking to who. And use these apás ("…") for normal speaking and (..'..) for those who are thinking.

    Ch 1 Random Forest
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    One Piece with Creati
    Anime & Comics · Cuchillo
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  • PABELO
    PABELO3d
    Commented
    Ch 5 Raiding a Marine Base
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    Goddess of Ice: Going for One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Maerry
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  • PABELO
    PABELO4d
    Commented

    her surname Liesha is much better than her name hahahah, whenever they mention Robin's mc, I remember Robin from DC's Batman

    "I'm not sure, what do you want Liesha?" Mom asked with a smile while she sat me down at a nearby sit in the kitchen.
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    Another Twilight fanfic
    Movies · EmphieIsMe
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  • PABELO
    PABELO4d
    Commented

    I don't understand that part, they can clearly hear the heartbeat, so why does he need to check the pulse?

    One by one the rest women came over to see for themselves, and all came to the same conclusion. I was not an immortal child.
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    Another Twilight fanfic
    Movies · EmphieIsMe
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  • PABELO
    PABELO4d
    Replied to Axel_

    Why can't I see the image?

    In his senses, these people all have the aura of Nora. Nora is hovering in the air with four pairs of angel wings and controlling their movement.
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    One Piece: King of Desire
    Anime & Comics · Bobodolo
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  • PABELO
    PABELO5d
    Replied to Bobodolo

    hahahaha I imagined this sentence, that you said with an innocent face

    J.V.E.N.
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    One Piece: King of Desire
    Anime & Comics · Bobodolo
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