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Stieborn
StiebornLv42yr
2023-04-27 20:13

The story is good, but my only problem is the grammar. The grammar makes the story confusing most of the time, I didn't even know which person is talking. So I recommend you get a beta reader to check for grammar mistakes and all.

Journey began from Azeroth: Head of Windrunner family

PraiseElune
4.4
89 Chs

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PraiseElune
PraiseEluneAuthor

I appreciate your support. I hope you'll like the story. Grammar-wise, prepositions and some commas were my weakness, but for others, if I were to change, the narrative voice would become different. That was also the dilemma when I used AI check. I really wish this doesn't bother your reading spirit.

2yr
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Very well written, highly engaging, cool plot. This is actually one of the more interesting pre-dark portal inserts into Warcraft that I've read. The mc merges with the existing character as the one in charge, and brings modern concepts to the table in an effort to revolutionise the forces availeble under their command to best sharpen and prepare for the dreadful future for their people that they know from the games. This isn't like the human centric fics where the focus is on trench warfare, polearms crossbows etc. Instead this is far more focused on adjusting the militairy doctrine, the strategy and tactics to best benefit the units utilising them after centuries of growing soft. Meanwhile there's politicks to deal with and the necessary maneuvering to be done to fill the vaults to have the funds to save the future. The tags of the story, make you think it's just gonna be some 18+ gender bender yuri fic, but this is much more than that. This isn't simply yuri action with some plot. This is a genuine warcraft themed novel with such undertones through slow build up throughout the plot. Tags if say for this thus far (ch16) : Warcraft, Militairy, Kingdom Building, Politics, Transmigration, Fix-it, Romance, War, Action, Fantasy, Adventure, Elves, Trolls, Rangers, Magic

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Someone_was_here
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It is well written, It has received consistent updates (up to chapter 20). The story has been well paced and entertaining (Although the start could have been better for my tastes). The design of the characters up to now are well-thought with a small exception: the main character somehow knows some military stuff even though he was just a student (although that can be explained if he just liked the war theme or had a uncle with military background or something). The world backgroung has been good, The author has been writing good descriptions.

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MangetsuTH
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Chap-16 and I can say that I'm enjoying the story a lot (and I'm not even a WoW fan), the grammar is a little confusing at times but it doesn't interfere too much. I hope to continue seeing this work in the future.

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Naischtir
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I realy love this story, only thing i´m dissapointed in is the upload for the next chapter. Already reread this part of the story 6-7 times. Hope for the author to continue this story. I´m very interested about the future developments Liressa will bring & her interactions with her daughters are only hearthwarming, would wish for a bit more active interaction with the family.

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Armykookie35
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This story is well written and in my opinion is one of the best fantasy novels I read so far 😍😍😍😌😌😌♥️

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galfimber
galfimberLv1

Фанфик очень хороший, читается очень легко.Таких сейчас мало, особенно по вов.Когда будет продолжение? /// The fanfiction is very good, it is very easy to read.There are few of them now, especially in the World of Warcraft.When will there be a sequel?

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Claurora_BlackRose
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AUTHOR-nim 🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️🙆🏻‍♀️I like your work! Your other work too: Miss Beautiful CEO. 💗💗Keep it up 🫶🏼

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I don't know much about the WoW world, but I found the story very interesting and well written. My suggestion would be for the author to create an auxiliary chapter with images and perhaps a small description of the characters.

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