It is well written, It has received consistent updates (up to chapter 20). The story has been well paced and entertaining (Although the start could have been better for my tastes). The design of the characters up to now are well-thought with a small exception: the main character somehow knows some military stuff even though he was just a student (although that can be explained if he just liked the war theme or had a uncle with military background or something). The world backgroung has been good, The author has been writing good descriptions.
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Many thanks for your review. It was indeed true the first chapter really stomped me for 5 days. And it later flows naturally. The author had no idea how to explain protagonist knowledge related to military affairs, because the author himself read military books from strategy, drills, manuals, to even CQBs since 11 years old. So, the author wrongly assumed every one knows a little, but this could still be saved. Your idea was well founded, uncle with military background, I'll take it. The author solemnly promised, chapters will be updated consistently each day except some circumstances. Lastly, your affirmation is always my motivations! Cheers!
