Review Detail of legends0356 in A Journey That Changed The World.

Everything about world building is great. The writing quality is phenomenal. my issue is with the story development. the pacing is really weird. The story spends a lot of time describing scenery and characters that only appear in the story for 1 or 2 chapters. important events almost seem rushed compared to the other events. Introduces lots of characters that don't end up holding much importance to the story.