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legends035612dCommentedCh 1066 Autumn Phantom Manor- legends035621dReplied to Spirit_Immortal
- legends03563mthCommentedCh 1365 Immortal Ensnaring Vault
- legends03564mthPosted
Everything about world building is great. The writing quality is phenomenal. my issue is with the story development. the pacing is really weird. The story spends a lot of time describing scenery and characters that only appear in the story for 1 or 2 chapters. important events almost seem rushed compared to the other events. Introduces lots of characters that don't end up holding much importance to the story.
- legends03568mthCommented" Noo! I can't die like this!"
- legends03568mthReplied to EnablingBarley
It's a luxury car. The point is exclusivity. Some rich people like the idea of things that are special and rare, the Ferrari is like that. They have this saying "you don't choose a ferrari, the ferrari chooses you." it's really an elitist brand.
Jun Tianyun consoled his heart. " just give me your red Ferrari." - legends03568mthReplied to Blaze196
Have you tried turning it off and on again sir?
With the power of Mechanical God's memory, fixing an ordinary air conditioner was easy. - legends03568mthReplied to GGloserzz_69
not music but zither
[ Ding! Ding! Ding! Host received the full inheritance of God of Four Arts!] - legends03568mthReplied to ZippyMagician
If you're talking about the general of that city, the guy that had the god of war Astral arts. I'm pretty sure that incarnation proceeds to become the evil God.
"I hadn't introduced myself yet? My apologies." After adjusting his posture, he continued with a handsome smile on his face, "My name is Tian Yi." - legends03568mthReplied to Morning_Star666
tian xin is the sword emperor
"I hadn't introduced myself yet? My apologies." After adjusting his posture, he continued with a handsome smile on his face, "My name is Tian Yi." - legends03568mthCommentedCh 1221 Not Even a Thousand Years Old
- legends03569mthReplied to ForManagaCh 187 185. Bully Loli (Light R-18)
- legends035610mthCommentedCh 185 183. Easy Mode
- legends03561yrReplied to Ayce_o_Spade
- legends03561yrCommented
this is the best, most well thought out beginning transition for any fan fiction I've ever read. great job
Ch 2 Prologue (2/2)detailA Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker - legends03561yrReplied to ForgottenHope
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- legends03561yrCommentedCh 213 Jun Tianyun Brewing Plans
- legends03561yrCommentedCh 85 give me a chat