Review Detail of FalSe_sMile in Tales of the New World

Item: Tales of the New World
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

FalSe_sMileLv31yrFalSe_sMile

So here's a first hand review based on the very first chapter. While I didn't understand the switch between first and third person, I found the first chapter very interesting. The moment when the father just casually talks about catching giant octopuses is quite surprising and establish quite well the kind of world into which we are. Next, it seems they are going to dive toward a sunken city, so I kind of want to see where this is going.

Tales of the New World

Koita

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KoitaAuthorKoita

In general, the change was made because I wasn't sure how to properly execute the first-person narration so I made this decision. Essentially only the first chapter looks like this which is why I would appreciate it if you continued reading. Thank you

1yr

FalSe_sMileLv3FalSe_sMile

On edit, the world is very interesting. I am at the fifth chapter, and until now, it seems to be pretty goo in my opinion.

1yr

KoitaAuthorKoita

sorry then for ch6

FalSe_sMile:On edit, the world is very interesting. I am at the fifth chapter, and until now, it seems to be pretty goo in my opinion.
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1yr

FalSe_sMileLv3FalSe_sMile

*good

FalSe_sMile:On edit, the world is very interesting. I am at the fifth chapter, and until now, it seems to be pretty goo in my opinion.
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1yr

FalSe_sMileLv3FalSe_sMile

Wait... WHAT DID YOU DO ?!!😂😂😂

Koita:sorry then for ch6
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1yr

KoitaAuthorKoita

FalSe_sMile:Wait... WHAT DID YOU DO ?!!😂😂😂

1yr

KoitaAuthorKoita

Koita:
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1yr

FalSe_sMileLv3FalSe_sMile

My, this... WAS a surprise. 😂

1yr

KoitaAuthorKoita

i'm really sorry 😂

FalSe_sMile:My, this... WAS a surprise. 😂

1yr

FalSe_sMileLv3FalSe_sMile

Don't sweat it, but it seems we have similar twist to our stories though mine happen in chapter 10. 😂

1yr