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YoureABum
YoureABumLv11yr
2023-04-29 21:04

The new cliche, grey MCs whos only side is their own. Nothing special for this type of MC either. another human who is a battle junky even though thats not a real thing. lol I' feel like I've read this story 50 times this year since tho only real difference is the origin of the MC. Story isn't bad and id say give it a chance but you can close your eyes and scroll and you'll find a similar story to read. and keeping canon the same isn't being smart. just sounds like lazy writing.

Asgard: God of Vengeance

7rox
4.7
33 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

thanks for the warning

1yr
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SujetoXVII
SujetoXVIILv1

I prefer a gray mc is idetified as a normal person, than one who is a socipath or psychopath who kills everything because yes, one who is a saint who is less than 1% of this world

1yr
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7rox
7roxAuthor

Self pat? First novel I’ve ever written. Help me out with some constructive criticism. And no, I don’t make any money from the fan fiction. Have fun.

1yr

_Sword_Immortal
_Sword_ImmortalLv12

It's pretty good. Nicely written, decent plot, ambitious mc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Xiphos_Gladius_03
Xiphos_Gladius_03Lv1

The story has a lot of potential. The writing quality is above average, and the idea behind the fanfic is nice and intresting. I hope you can see it to its completion.

1yr
JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15

Good story idea, but it is ruined with mc wanting to stick with canon events. Should go full au.

1yr
Buffsparce
BuffsparceLv13

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Nob7
Nob7Lv4

I pray to you, Author-Sama, please don't drop this Fanfic.

1yr
Yash_destroyer_007
Yash_destroyer_007Lv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
darren_burns
darren_burnsLv10

Please update soon I am looking forward to seeing the path God of Vengeance will take further here on out. It's a shame he isn't the Crown Prince since Thor won't take ruling seriously.

1yr
TheAbsolution
TheAbsolutionLv4

nicely done 👍 overall a good piece of work hope you keep up the good work

1yr
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