From ch 69 comment cause I'm lazy to write once more. "Wow that was trashy why she acting like that Lo 1? Based on her personality and upto how much you have shown of her this feels forced as f. well whatever already knew what kind of low life you are I already gave you feedbacks twice cause I liked the start and you said he wouldn't be be ta too which you contradict yourself two times by making m c act like a be ta mas oc hist yeah this is trash Lo I. all the wait and be ta mas oc ism and we get the s ex at ch 69 yet the woman who is mc going to have s ex with doesnt act like that lol now probably he is gonna make excuses it wasn't her and someone else realizing the mistake typical mongrel and yeah well all the bs m c holding power and sh it for fun and trash Lo I bro it would only be excused if your novel is good, well was good at the start but starts going more and more trashy and with how you keep streaching things"
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