Item: Eroge God
Rating: 4
Author: SS_Ozymander

SS_OzymanderLv22yr

2023-04-07 06:45

WQ: 2 or 3 (I put 3) Author is either lazy or an illiterate barbarian. He writes everything like he's texting a friend. Constantly using 'bro' 'yall' ect... it doesn't fit and makes it seem like the author is an illiterate barbarian. SD: 4 Not much to complain about here. It's just how a normal story on wn progresses. CD: 3 or 4 (I'm leaning 3 but I'll put 4 because I'm being nice and there's not many chapters yet) So far they kind of feel like templates and conversation and development is ruined by the authors illiterate barbarian writing style because it seems like even though most characters he interacts with are supposed to be royalty they all speak like street hooligans. The conversation is also kind of dry, not completely soulless but not anything impressive. US: 5 Don't have any problems with it. not much to say. WB: 3 or 4 again I'll put 4 because I'm being nice. It's not a fanfic. don't know why it's in the fanfic section, it should be in the novel section. The world is kind of explained. It's just your average fantasy world with a demon king archetype that the heroes must defeat, just with modern technology.

Eroge God

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