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Guy_Slade
Guy_SladeLv41yr
2023-04-24 05:55

This is a solid start (11 chapters in) The quality so far is without fault, the characters seem alive and the story is interesting. I like the direction the story seems to be taking and the fact the main character is an old man is refreshing compared to the usual teen angst we tend get with Naruto FF. Keep it up.

Uzumaki Fire God

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3.9
80 Chs

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Believers
BelieversLv4

Great idea, but please, don't make MC young again, it will ruin the whole Idea and background story , and please don't give any other template as the name suggest Fire God and who better than Yamamoto, he on par or may way stronger than many Otsutsuki members with his bankai , make him the definition of ' Never underestimate a Old man in a profession where people die young '

1yr

GaZe_Zero
GaZe_ZeroLv2

Reveal spoiler

1yr
XRavenX
XRavenXLv3

Fine, but I believe that a good chuck of this story was made by an ai. This wouldn’t be a problem imo if you even bothered to edit some of the text to fit the actual Naruto story.

1yr
Mark_Mads
Mark_MadsLv1

The author re-read Chinese novels about young masters. All Naruto characters have been changed. Event mixed up.

1yr
Baldysalino
BaldysalinoLv13

Typical wuxia bs, with a psycho main character and no actual story

1yr
Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

I was completely fine with events being AU but characters act so different that this isn't Naruto anymore, everything turned chinese except the names.

1yr
Daoist2jw2uD
Daoist2jw2uDLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Lucien7
Lucien7Lv12

Story premise is amazing... But the execution is horrible and not re a dable.

1yr
Henrique_Furtado
Henrique_FurtadoLv4

this is an incredible idea and thhas a lot of potential

1yr
Arny
ArnyLv15

This is kinda bad, mega rushed, just the old Mc that acts like an edgy xianxa mc murder hobbo , and everyone else « cowering in fear and awed by mc power ». Badly written of both Naruto’s and Bleach’s elements. It’s ok to speed run read it tho, but ye, kinda boring. The idea was good, sad that it’s so badly written.

1yr
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