Item: NBA Error
Rating: 4.8
Author: Four95

Four95Lv141yr

2023-05-14 19:16

Hidden Gem. It is a great sports story that I am bv happy to have found. I hope the author keeps up the good work. heads Up: The grammar and length area work through but the author has shown improvement. Really excited for more.

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