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ArthurCE10
ArthurCE10Lv41yr
2023-08-21 20:57

I was expecting him to be good by the second season but no. Having a system apparently makes you double your efforts while gaining nothing. This story would've been better without the system. Anyway good luck with the story.

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LordMifune
4.3
199 Chs

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LordMifune
LordMifuneAuthor

I confirm something to you. You must have realized it, but I tried to erase the system from history. I indeed think it was a mistake to have it. The problem is that I didn't want an active system like in all the other novels. I had to take a step back and wanted to do something new, and I probably failed because I didn't show the MC's progress enough. Even if I have no regrets, without a system would have been for the best because a system does not go with a realistic progression as I put in place. I realized it too late.

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