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Fafnir_87
Fafnir_87Lv41yr
2023-05-13 09:17

This is a great story with the author already having an idea for the development of the player for the first few seasons. Excited for more content from this amazing book.

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LordMifune
4.3
199 Chs

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Ulesies
UlesiesLv4

Best story I've ever read on this app. An actual realistic ish main character, who doesn't through the magic of a system turn into michael jordan in his rookie year. The main character, Hector actually fails and learns which is refreshing.

1yr

covestar
covestarLv14

Honestly, writing is ok. A few grammatical errors but nothing that stops you from reading fluently. The main problem is that his system doesn’t really do system things, the system is not really explored or talked about, the only thing we know is that it fixes his posture when working out or shooting, I wish the system would get an upgrade or something, he has his system and has played five seasons but still loses to the well know centers just for plot, his effort does not match his win rate, five seasons and bro still feels mediocre. I get the whole mature thing with top lives but bro is too zen, talk about his daily life with actual detail, basketball players and fans talk a lot online add a story on that too, show interactions with other players instead of a line just saying "they talked” actually show the talking and write about some actual behind the scenes. Also bro has two kids and a wife, it’s like they don’t do stuff together, they feel like character fillers. I have not seen any more improvements from mc, especially coming from a guy with 2 lives and even has a system, most importantly he has played 5+ seasons and not much to talk about … especially for a guy with a system.

1yr
BQ99
BQ99Lv4

Balanced story with interesting developments

1yr
antpeek
antpeekLv14

Nice stuff

1yr
DAVID_arowolo
DAVID_arowoloLv14

Great just great

1yr
ArthurCE10
ArthurCE10Lv4

I was expecting him to be good by the second season but no. Having a system apparently makes you double your efforts while gaining nothing. This story would've been better without the system. Anyway good luck with the story.

1yr
00Sidney00
00Sidney00Lv5

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1yr
EdgeOfTime
EdgeOfTimeLv14

This is a really good sports novel. The pacing is spot on as the first few season is character development.

1yr
Electric_Jean
Electric_JeanLv14

I have been searching for good basketball novels for quite a while. This novel just made my top 3 favorite basketball novels.

1yr
Four95
Four95Lv14

Hidden Gem. It is a great sports story that I am bv happy to have found. I hope the author keeps up the good work. heads Up: The grammar and length area work through but the author has shown improvement. Really excited for more.

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