Alright loving this story so far, except the names that got mismachted or were wrongly translated the grammar itself is superb, this is a legendary tier translation compared to the rest of those that are out there. The story itself may have some "chinks in it’s armor" so to say but otherwise it is one of the good ones so if you are expecting writing quality on par with Martin sorry to say but I don’t think you will ever find what you are looking for. As for our MC who is obviously a reincarnation but we don’t get any backstory on his previous life only that he knows where he was reincarnated so we don’t really know what to expect from him at the beginning. He certainly was no warrior/soldier I can spoil you that much. As for his development " from a chicken to a dragon" is all I can say without spoilers. Sure there are some in inconsistencies but this is a fanfic not a bestseller So anyway those were my thoughts on this
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