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Dominik_Wunsch1mthReplied to I_dont_believe_itWell…some could have been in Kingslandig during the Lannister betrayal before they "joined"Nightswatch and seen a dragon flying over the city.
The day become tense as the men of the Night's Watch gathered on the towering walls of Castle Black, uncertainty etched on their faces. Bahamut, the colossal dragon, loomed in the distance. Most of these men had never encountered a dragon before, and fear gripped their hearts.- Dominik_Wunsch8mthCommented
Okay here we go again 😂 Benjen Stark (duh) and Alliser Thorne
Bran Stark and Alyssa Snow, among the black-cloaked brothers, escaped death in the icy North. - Dominik_Wunsch8mthCommented
*Rhoyne river
He had once guarded the wild mountain camp by the Lorn River in Andalos for several years. - Dominik_Wunsch8mthCommented
*Reach
"As for the South, the Dornish army's plundering and killing in the Riverlands have angered the Tyrell family. The Rose of Highgarden has summoned her vassals, vowing revenge." - Dominik_Wunsch8mthCommented
I think he means Mia the kingsguard.
Although Viserys had control over this power, he had bestowed the black mist upon only a few. His trusted legion commanders were among them, as were Missandei and Balerion, who had been given it while still in the egg. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthReplied to Aziraal
Yep
Robert grabbed Torrhen Stark, the second son of Rickard Stark, the Earl of Karhold, and roared. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthCommented
Correct me if I am wrong but it should be Karstark
Robert grabbed Torrhen Stark, the second son of Rickard Stark, the Earl of Karhold, and roared. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthCommented
100 years no?
Maester Aemon was so old that all the people of his generation had long since died. He was a man from 200 years ago in the reign of Aegon. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthPosted
Alright loving this story so far, except the names that got mismachted or were wrongly translated the grammar itself is superb, this is a legendary tier translation compared to the rest of those that are out there. The story itself may have some "chinks in it’s armor" so to say but otherwise it is one of the good ones so if you are expecting writing quality on par with Martin sorry to say but I don’t think you will ever find what you are looking for. As for our MC who is obviously a reincarnation but we don’t get any backstory on his previous life only that he knows where he was reincarnated so we don’t really know what to expect from him at the beginning. He certainly was no warrior/soldier I can spoil you that much. As for his development " from a chicken to a dragon" is all I can say without spoilers. Sure there are some in inconsistencies but this is a fanfic not a bestseller So anyway those were my thoughts on this
- Dominik_Wunsch9mthCommented
Definitely worth the read and continuation of translation, except the few name changes this is a really great translation the mtl version is…mega bad. And the 2 star review 100% bogus the guy probably read to many bad Chinese novels and now see them everywhere😂 I hope you will continue your work on this novel
Ch 400 Chapter 400: The Braavos Snow Disaster - Dominik_Wunsch9mthReplied to Sasuke_Uchia_9985
Well…close but it’s Velaryon
Tidestone Isle, home of House Valerion. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthCommented
House Tarly comes from the Reach, he should be commanding troops from the Reach.
The seasoned commander of the Riverlands was very good at directing combat, mobilizing the soldiers' fighting spirit, and boosting morale. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthCommented
Rhoyne river
Over eighty thousand Dothraki had trampled the banks of the Lhazareen River. They had come to attack Pentos in a grand display of force, only to retreat in disgrace. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthReplied to Heavens_EqualCh 295 Chapter 295: Turmoil
- Dominik_Wunsch9mthCommented
*Reach
Although the wildlings and White Walkers may not be able to threaten the Riverlands far in the south. - Dominik_Wunsch9mthReplied to AndrewHunt42
Nah, the names are changed again. The lake that flows into the sea of Meereen is actually flowing into the sea of Myrth I don’t think there is a sea of meereen😂 They are still in flatlands heading to Myr.
"We should take something back to the Great Grass Sea, shouldn't we?"