It just keeps getting worse and worse with each chapter. The main character lacks any "character". And its presence only subtracts from the logic of the plot. We get numerous opinions about the ML, but his actions aren't reassuring. A lacking protagonist, with a significantly bland story combined with a writing style that doesn't fit. Nevertheless, I invite anyone who reads my comment to try it. After all, it may be a simple matter of taste.
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LIKEDepends on your preference. The mc wants to be just there guiding the og characters to his ideal future. It sets itself apart from those 'usual' edgy and power hungry asoiaf fics but hey it's a 'fanfic', there are a lot of what ifs that we can think of and rarely that it gets completed.