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2023-04-11 13:16

I'm really loving the story so far, just a few questions. Do you have a planned upload schedule and patreon? Are you open to her getting a replacement arm? If so I have a few cool ideas from the cyberpunk 2077 universe and while they aren't perfectly in universe they still match quite well and would look sick. Anyways this is my first review, so I should leave some actual review stuff, love the world building and writing style, nice to read something that feels professional every once and a while. Also loving the custom saber types, but now I wish an mc had a light scythe so bad LOL.

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Anyways if you're open to the idea I was thinking along the lines of these arms, not insisting on your story go anyway though, I hear how entitled and annoying some people can be. Just wanted to help offer ideas if this was in your plans for her.

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She doesn't have a metal arm for reasons that will be explored later on in the story. I gave her one arm because I want her to have one arm because I think it's cool.

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I have an idea for a metal arm already, but there are no plans for it to actually happen as of now

DOKKAEBII:Anyways if you're open to the idea I was thinking along the lines of these arms, not insisting on your story go anyway though, I hear how entitled and annoying some people can be. Just wanted to help offer ideas if this was in your plans for her.
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DOKKAEBIILv14

Alright, love the way your story’s going

TheWanderingWriter:I have an idea for a metal arm already, but there are no plans for it to actually happen as of now
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