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Starparticle
StarparticleLv111yr
2023-04-29 07:49

A fun novel that is poking fun of tropes - by using tropes! I like the meta commentary, and I'm sad some seem to not realize that the intention of the story is to comment on writing and how we all fall into cliches no matter what. For a first draft, this is great! Pacing can sometimes be fast, but I know from experience that it is just because you want to get to that cool part you're dying to write. Two things can help that: 1. Writing that scene you want to SO BADLY, and then not publish it. 2. Make a plot line of how you want things to work out, and add little twisty and turny paths to get to the next plot point. Make the walk just as interesting as the destination, and I promise it will fill out the 'soul' of your work. ..and update more often, my dude!!!!!!!!!!!! You gotta, gotta, gotta get on a schedule of some kind to retain readers. Post every Friday, or every Tuesday - whatever day suits you best. You can write all week long, but don't post it until the days you've set for yourself to upload. I really hope my review helped - and I really hope you keep going! I want to see how this unfolds so badly. The MC is really interesting, and the stream of consciousness absolutely does good/harm to the way the audience sees him. You keep it up, and don't stop no matter the trolling!

Reincarnation of a Failed Author: I Hate Clichés

ItsHashi
4.4
125 Chs

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Starparticle
StarparticleLv11

I hate how much the steadiness of releasing puts so much weight on the star rating, but I also understand why. Don't misunderstand the 3 stars -- I was just honest about the upload rate and WN is apparently hard-core!

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ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Heya, thank you so much for checking out this story of mine and going into details so you could help me, I truly appreciate it! The 3 stars does sting a little and about the uploads… I release chapters daily, I don’t think it is bad at all…

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GrymAbyss
GrymAbyssLv4

8 chs a week according to webnovel. Definitely not bad.

ItsHashi:Heya, thank you so much for checking out this story of mine and going into details so you could help me, I truly appreciate it! The 3 stars does sting a little and about the uploads… I release chapters daily, I don’t think it is bad at all…
1yr
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ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Yep, I make sure to upload AT LEAST a chapter a day, sometimes two

GrymAbyss:8 chs a week according to webnovel. Definitely not bad.
1yr
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ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Time for a shameless author review, I don't have much to talk about so I'll just fill you all in on some details: Mc: A failed author who reincarnated to a world of sword and sorcery from Earth(with slight changes because of rights stuff)-- He is a funny guy in my opinion and will be... for some time that is. Currently, he's a bit OP against other students, but that's about it. Is there a system? Yes, there is going to be one later on. I'm trying to make the world Crisyes as realistic as possible. (The system won't make him too OP.) Is there going to be harem? Yes, I think so in the future(Helis isn't going to be a lady magnet), and yes, there will be those certain scenes you like too so be braced to witness good stuff when the time comes ;). What about action? Yes, I will put in quite a lot of hand-to-hand fights, and overall, I think I will make the battles quite enticing. Well, that's about it. Oh, and you will notice dialogues quite a lot, since I like to make it realistic with the characters' behavior too, (Well, my mc just takes over me so I can't do anything much.) That's about it, you can take this review as a QnA spot and ask questions regarding the story(I'll answer those that I don't find as spoiling.) And please support me :)! Oh, and don't drop before reading 30 chapters if you aren't liking it because something during the later end of these chapters may happen to make you want to keep reading ;).

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Succulent_Peaches
Succulent_PeachesLv15

It started off really annoying but when I got to the acedemy arc it got really good. I got up to chapter 92 and I really liked it so far. It was well worth the coins and the character progression for the mc is worth the wait. Would recommend read this novel.

1yr
Glezeri
GlezeriLv15

cliches are cliches cause they work, its just that some of them are really anoying but you have to sprinkle some in, its like seasoning

1yr
Rohan_Shinde_2731
Rohan_Shinde_2731Lv4

I am already enjoying it after reading few chapters [img=recommend]

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himitsu_desuu
himitsu_desuuLv14

urgghh... maybe just me, but i never really liked this kind of overly interactive character. mc is the kind that never takes anything seriously... i only read until ch 20ish so idk if those stuffs will change later on

1yr
zenon_9485
zenon_9485Lv2

ts has big potential I can't wait to see more chapters of this 🙌🐐

2yr
ToufiqUlAlam
ToufiqUlAlamLv4

hahaha...let me laugh.. The reincarnated baby-dude is so priceless. The conversation and thoughts...are awesome. The author did not take too much time to get right into the main story and so far...I like it so much!! This is a super fun story. If you begin reading there is no stopping it!! Thanks for such a good laugh, Author!!! Cheers.

1yr
The_little_boy
The_little_boyLv3

One of the best books out there. has one of the biggest potential, cant wait to see what would happen next. Give it a read and trust me, you wouldnt regret it

1yr
MightyEagle
MightyEagleLv15

Interesting and enjoyable novel. I’ve read all 7 chapters available and I’m excited to keep reading.

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