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ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor1yr
2023-04-19 05:17

Time for a shameless author review, I don't have much to talk about so I'll just fill you all in on some details: Mc: A failed author who reincarnated to a world of sword and sorcery from Earth(with slight changes because of rights stuff)-- He is a funny guy in my opinion and will be... for some time that is. Currently, he's a bit OP against other students, but that's about it. Is there a system? Yes, there is going to be one later on. I'm trying to make the world Crisyes as realistic as possible. (The system won't make him too OP.) Is there going to be harem? Yes, I think so in the future(Helis isn't going to be a lady magnet), and yes, there will be those certain scenes you like too so be braced to witness good stuff when the time comes ;). What about action? Yes, I will put in quite a lot of hand-to-hand fights, and overall, I think I will make the battles quite enticing. Well, that's about it. Oh, and you will notice dialogues quite a lot, since I like to make it realistic with the characters' behavior too, (Well, my mc just takes over me so I can't do anything much.) That's about it, you can take this review as a QnA spot and ask questions regarding the story(I'll answer those that I don't find as spoiling.) And please support me :)! Oh, and don't drop before reading 30 chapters if you aren't liking it because something during the later end of these chapters may happen to make you want to keep reading ;).

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Banana_Legoland
Banana_LegolandLv13

How many hearem members?

ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

3 at most!

Banana_Legoland:How many hearem members?
yb48
yb48Lv13

In which chapter did the system appear?

ItsHashi:3 at most!
ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

It appears later on on the third volume as per my expectations and calculations of my novel

yb48:In which chapter did the system appear?
Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv14

Give this guy a medal xD

ItsHashi:3 at most!
ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Well thank you tho I don’t know why🕺

Jorlat123:Give this guy a medal xD
Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv14

Small harem for the win! That's why! [img=recommend]

ItsHashi:Well thank you tho I don’t know why🕺
ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Yeyy, glad someone has the same opinion as I

Jorlat123:Small harem for the win! That's why! [img=recommend]
aniket_keer
aniket_keerLv4

bro your novel is just like mushoku tensei 🙂

ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Just the start is heavily inspired off of it, the rest is a surprise ;)

aniket_keer:bro your novel is just like mushoku tensei 🙂
Nikhil_Bannerjee
Nikhil_BannerjeeLv4

main character's personality and morality compass ?

ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Both will change over time, currently during the first volume he is more of a positive guy and has his own beliefs that “killing is no good” and what not whereas on the second volume he’ll become more of a quiet and pessimist guy who kills if it is necessary for his own survival and benefit. My characters will undergo changes as they go through struggles and times, and so will their thoughts and opinions, after all, I’m tryna make my characters as real as possible.

Nikhil_Bannerjee:main character's personality and morality compass ?
Tomate_con_sal
Tomate_con_salLv12

🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋?

ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

sry but i dont understand..?🙏

Tomate_con_sal:🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋?
Tomate_con_sal
Tomate_con_salLv12

I meant: there are chapters H(I don't know if you understand me I'm using google translate)

ItsHashi:sry but i dont understand..?🙏
ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Oooh, well, there is one like that right now and there will be more to come in the future ;)

Tomate_con_sal:I meant: there are chapters H(I don't know if you understand me I'm using google translate)
Tomate_con_sal
Tomate_con_salLv12

That there are chapters like this, it is appreciated, as long as there are not too many. Thanks for taking the time to answer my question.

ItsHashi:Oooh, well, there is one like that right now and there will be more to come in the future ;)
ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Don’t worry, there are not too many, only when the time is perfect for it to happen! Don’t worry, and enjoy the story :)))

Tomate_con_sal:That there are chapters like this, it is appreciated, as long as there are not too many. Thanks for taking the time to answer my question.
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brook_y
brook_yLv4

Everything is totally stupid after 25 chap and there is nothing interesting that makes me want to read more

ItsHashi
ItsHashiAuthor

Welp, I certainly do apologize if it didn't suit your tastes, a thing isn't made for everyone after all. I also do think that having my mc and the whole cast in a constant fight for life does make it interesting, but you make you. Thank you for reading that far!

brook_y:Everything is totally stupid after 25 chap and there is nothing interesting that makes me want to read more
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