Review Detail of Shanto_Akter in Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality

thank you for the review. you make many good points and I agree with some and not with others. the level of his knowledge is dependent on the resources in his family home. He might have been considered a genius in his past life, but with limited supplies and information in his current home, it becomes infinitely harder to secure the knowledge needed to make him a "genius". This is not to say that the mc is not mentally ill. he most definitely is, as I had implied several times throughout the first 30 chapters or so, but not the way you have described it. Seth Evergreen was a prideful and even arrogant man who prioritized himself over everyone else. this does not mean Silas Skylark will be that same man. People evolve, and Silas might just surprise you. Also, the thing about him being a master of many fields but "bad at this particular thing" is an intentional plot point as well that links to a bigger picture. I try my best to avoid making plot changing remarks for just the sake of plot moving forward (flashbacks included). Anyway, thanks for the review. I appreciate your thoughts on my novel so far and I will strive to improve my writings throughout the near future.

You make a lot of good points. The main reason he isn't showing his prowess as a mage is that he doesn't know how to absorb one element at a time; if he does show them he is a mage, he will have to show them his affinity toward magic. When he touches the tablet, he will either not absorb any of the elements or absorb all of them. This problem will be fixed soon, though, as I had promised in one of my other comments. The girl had asked him to fight, and he saw an opportunity to take advantage of her declaration by suggesting whoever wins gets a favor. He knows that she will most likely be extremely powerful both politically and physically in the future. Having someone like her owe him a favor will put him in a powerful position in the future, especially over someone he might consider a "Threat" The bloodlust during the fight was reckless but calculated. The only witnesses were a bunch of teenagers and children. No one will believe that a child-like Silas was capable of beating a 19-year-old, and from Silas' scouting with the use of Mystic eyes, he believed that no one other than them was in the area to witness the fight. Sure, his sister was there, but he also assumed that his parents wouldn't believe her. Finally, you make a good point about letting others drive the plot forward instead of Silas doing so. I will either rewrite the chapter to fit that narrative or do it from this point onwards. Thanks for the comment. Appreciated.