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Captain_SpoilerLv131yr
2024-02-28 20:54

Honest reviews are here.. I only read up to Ch100, and after that, I decided to stop reading this novel.. This novel is about MC, who keeps reincarnated countless times after he learns "Life equation" on earth.. MC is reincarnated as goblin, horse, and so on until one day, he reincarnated as fetus who in the progress coming out from his mother ehm.. MC got the memories and knowledge of his past life, but no skill is brought back into this life.. MC got a system to keep him in check.. No quest or mission is given, no communication with the system, and no OP cheat.. You will see the journey of the "baby MC" growth progress.. From the days he is born until he grows older.. By older, I mean 6 years old.. Yes, at Ch.100, MC is still 6 years old kid.. And as MC has going thru many reincarnated cycles, he is not acting as a child at all.. Just by the way MC speaks (rude and ill-mannered) and action (manipulative his own family).. The author ruins the image of innocent kids.. In this novel, the author tries to make MC strong but not overpowered.. You will see how many times MC is in life and death situation at a toddler or kid age.. Instead of letting MC have a peaceful growth phase and learning arc at a young age, the author skipped that and threw MC into crisis situations many times.. There are many times you would see that the author keeps changing the character or outline of the story.. For example, you think MC is just a "curious" individual type of person, but then later, MC seems like "psychopath" and even further later on, MC changed into "willing to do anything" for his family.. There are also other cases, like when you read at the beginning, you will feel that MC has a weak father, but later, his seem weak father is actually strong.. The storyline also changes, like at first, MC is at his village with his family, but later, MC suddenly joins Evil Organisation without mentioning his city/village or his family.. I feel like I am reading a different novel.. The author also uses new terms for power levels like Oryx, Garnett, Topaz, Amethyst, Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby, and Diamond.. This is my first time that I heard this type of magic power level.. Even I'm not sure if I list it right.. There are also a character that you thought might become his rival or master (important characters for this novel), but they died later on. So, this novel is unpredictable and keeps changing the pace of the storyline and character from a wisp of thought of the author..

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final review upto chapter 100... story is average with some flaw and some good point.. cons:- 1)- mc constantly getting into life and death situation. form age 1.5 he is fighting life and death situation as trouble always come to him and boom plot armor survie.. he lives in no name town with all the family member too strong and care for him but still he always end up life and death situation and somehow survive cause he just learned some fking spell few days ago.. 2) the way he use and manipulate his sweet and caring family is very disgusting. he didn't even make sure to make his sister happy who litraly died protecting him. and yeah people are trash family is not smart enough blalbalba ..this all the thing that mc thinks.. but if you see mc from unbiased point he would seem disgusting as a family member his sister end up distancing herself from everyone due to mc mistake and all mc did was played victim card while his sister end up taking blames for mc mistake.. 3) fight is boring and long.. every fight is boring and long the reason is - mc 2 paragraph of internal monoloug after every villains cliche acting or dialouge.. 4) mc hides everything from his family for no reason. and no he doesn't hides his power from rest of the world .. he just lie to his family even if he doesn't need to.... well it's not about trust issue as everyone already know how poerful he is so what is the point of changing the source of his power... but it's okey ... first 3 point is what I trully don't like about this story. pros:- nice story , smart mc , good power system , good grammar .

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