Review Detail of AnotherMadKat in One Wish to Own the World

I take critiques well, but this makes no sense to me. At what point did he go there out of free will? he never had the choice whether to go or not, bringing him to the main clan was the direct order of the patriarch, and it's mentioned clearly. Besides, if you didn't read the book, how do you know he chose to grow up there and didn't leave?

I don't care if you take criticism well or not. I never offend any novel. I leave what I feel there and sometimes it's harsh. And like I said, I loved the start, but making the MC live in a place that house people that crippled his mother? That's a no for me. Simple as that. I didn't mention this earlier, but here goes. ----- With all the intelligence given to him by god, him not making any countermeasures to the assistant's betrayal is beyond me. With wisdom comes indifference towards trust, that's how you portray the MC throughout the first volume. But even with his cold attitude towards the assistant, he blindly trusted the woman. Again, I make the point, wasn't he literally blessed by god with unparalleled intelligence? How can he disregard such a simple occurrence like betrayal? Didn't he relive his entire previous life inside his mother's womb? Are you making it so that MC only brought the unresolved trauma and did not learn anything from the human behaviour? Then again, what use is intelligence if he cannot plan for the future and take calculated risks?

If you say so. If you don't like how things took a turn, it's your choice and you don't have to read the novel. Good luck finding something you like where nothing bad ever happens and the MC lives in a supportive community his whole life.

Did you read my comment earlier? Have I mentioned the need to stay in a supportive community? I mentioned the fact that although he was blessed with unparalleled intelligence he still failed to take into account betrayal. And yes, because of that, I did not like MC having to live in a clan that crippled his mother. Don't try to personally attack me, when I mentioned something for you to work on. That's what the review section is for. This is not a place to have debates. This section is where the author takes multiple perspectives into account.

Alright, let's go over your review part by part. You loved the first volume - great, glad you enjoyed my work. The plot is generic - You're referring to the background, not the plot. For the background to be unique he'd have to be a father or a middle-aged man. As long as he is young, it's going to be generic. Orphan? used. Hating parents? used. Orphan and raised by an oppressive uncle? used. Parents with no background? used. Parents with background? used. You got the point, it was all done before many times on Webnovel. By the way, betrayals like that aren't generic here, they mostly happen in the first 2-3 chapters, not so late into the story (that's 150 pages.) MC goes to the clan who wounded his mother - True. He has no choice about it and he can't refuse. I guess the question is whether he integrates into the clan or not. You don't know what happened since you didn't read it, so I don't know why it bothers you so much. MC never took countermeasures against Sol's betrayal - False. He ensured she'd always be weaker than him and made her stay by his side as a nanny rather than let her go once he was done with her. MC isn't all-knowing, I never hid it. It's not even going to be the last bad thing that will happen to him. MC didn't learn from past life - He learned many things, and he will continue to learn. He didn't repeat a mistake so far. As I wrote in my own review, he is neither Kira nor Lelouch. While he outsmarts his enemies many times, he also has his own share of setbacks. Again, you don't have to like my story, but many points in your review were unjustified in my eyes. Anyway, thank you for your support and for sharing your opinion.

"I wish to have the highest intelligence possible" This is how to start the novel. The novel's entire foundation is based on the fact that the MC is highly intelligent. He wished for intelligence. So, you mentioning he does not have a Kira like intelligence makes no sense. Why ask for intelligence if he isn't smarter than everyone then? MC planned for Sol's betrayal by making sure she is weaker than him? Now tell me, does her strength matter in betrayal when she was weaker than him to begin with? No. Why? Because him, his father, his mother- literally everyone is stronger than her (he father being as strong as the sect master). So if he was highly intelligent, he needed countermeasures to make sure she wasn't going to spread information about him. (I'm not going to talk about him going to that clan, because I don't have any idea about it as I didn't read it and him having to go to the clan because he had no choice is because of his own fault as he openly showed everything to Sol.) But, why do you make the MC wish for intelligence, if he isn't going to be like Kira? God gave him intelligence and he made sure to wish for that wish, without any loopholes to exploit. Those were your words you wrote in the novel. MC doesn't have to be 'all knowing'. There is a difference between 'all knowing' and 'smart'. The story's strong point is MC's intelligence -which you portray to the reader in the prologue- so if he isn't 'impossibly' smart, then how is the story any different from other cultivation novels where the MC is betrayed, lose his parents (in this case has to leave his parents) and abandoned and slowly get stronger? Which is why I mentioned the story is generic. "Highest intelligence possible" 👆🏼 Again, you words. Not mine.

Forget it, I'm not going to argue about it. This is not the kind of novel where MC predicts everyone's actions and I never intended it to be. Mind games happen, but they're not the theme of this novel. If you're bothered by it, I apologize, but it's just not the kind of novel you want it to be. His intelligence is about understanding. understanding cultivation concepts quickly.