Review after reading the first Two Volumes (chapter 63): Writing Quality: Really good, can't seem to find any problem with it. It's understandable and without any annoying mishaps. Story Development: Love it. A lot has happened till now and never once did I feel that it's rushed or It's slow in any way. Story completely sucks you in and honestly the only problem It's waiting for the chapters, lol. Character Design: I like the MC. Author advertised him as a Villain and I saw a lot of complaints that he isn't a villain and he is an anti-hero. But I believe him to be a villain. I think webnovel reader saw so many murderous and r*pist villains that they completely forgot about the Apathetic and Goal driven villains. They Expect them to constantly kill somebody to be considered villain. I like his character tho. For other characters, haven't seen anybody that left an impression on me. they're mostly genetic, but I like that he operates alone. Updating Stability: Great, currently one chapter a day, some day's two. Wished it was more. World Background: Not much Explored, but the Author did lay a foundation of it in one chapter (can't seem to remember which one). But the MC is still a kid, so till he matures (his body), then I think he can start exploring and the author can give us more thorough explanations of his whereabouts. That't it. Definitely Recommend.
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LIKEFrom the info given by the Author. Starting From chapter 2, the story would progress in Ken's POV. but the narration is still from the third point of view.i feel that Third point of view narration has become tiresome to read. and with stories progression i think the narrative would become bothersome.Writing Quality: Average.Narration: Average.Story: Good.Attachment towards MC: Good.
The story is written in a third-person narrative. What I meant in the author's note was that while the first chapter was written based on what God felt/saw/knew, the rest will be focused on Ken's thoughts/emotions/knowledge/experiences. The first chapter wasn't written in the first person either.
Will mc care for his parents?or he is villain that don't care for his parents?