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TheAtheist
TheAtheistLv41yr
2023-05-27 01:08

Review after reading the first Two Volumes (chapter 63): Writing Quality: Really good, can't seem to find any problem with it. It's understandable and without any annoying mishaps. Story Development: Love it. A lot has happened till now and never once did I feel that it's rushed or It's slow in any way. Story completely sucks you in and honestly the only problem It's waiting for the chapters, lol. Character Design: I like the MC. Author advertised him as a Villain and I saw a lot of complaints that he isn't a villain and he is an anti-hero. But I believe him to be a villain. I think webnovel reader saw so many murderous and r*pist villains that they completely forgot about the Apathetic and Goal driven villains. They Expect them to constantly kill somebody to be considered villain. I like his character tho. For other characters, haven't seen anybody that left an impression on me. they're mostly genetic, but I like that he operates alone. Updating Stability: Great, currently one chapter a day, some day's two. Wished it was more. World Background: Not much Explored, but the Author did lay a foundation of it in one chapter (can't seem to remember which one). But the MC is still a kid, so till he matures (his body), then I think he can start exploring and the author can give us more thorough explanations of his whereabouts. That't it. Definitely Recommend.

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DevaVeeran
DevaVeeranLv11

From the info given by the Author. Starting From chapter 2, the story would progress in Ken's POV. but the narration is still from the third point of view.i feel that Third point of view narration has become tiresome to read. and with stories progression i think the narrative would become bothersome.Writing Quality: Average.Narration: Average.Story: Good.Attachment towards MC: Good.

Railvas
RailvasAuthor

The story is written in a third-person narrative. What I meant in the author's note was that while the first chapter was written based on what God felt/saw/knew, the rest will be focused on Ken's thoughts/emotions/knowledge/experiences. The first chapter wasn't written in the first person either.

DevaVeeran:From the info given by the Author. Starting From chapter 2, the story would progress in Ken's POV. but the narration is still from the third point of view.i feel that Third point of view narration has become tiresome to read. and with stories progression i think the narrative would become bothersome.Writing Quality: Average.Narration: Average.Story: Good.Attachment towards MC: Good.
masterkiritojj
masterkiritojjLv2

Will mc care for his parents?or he is villain that don't care for his parents?

Railvas:The story is written in a third-person narrative. What I meant in the author's note was that while the first chapter was written based on what God felt/saw/knew, the rest will be focused on Ken's thoughts/emotions/knowledge/experiences. The first chapter wasn't written in the first person either.
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Railvas
RailvasAuthor

Hey everyone, the story has been here for a while. I write this new review because I've rewritten the first volume, or more specifically, chapters 25-30, due to my own preferences. After editing, Ken is not a villain in the first volume, so don't come here crying about the villain tag without reading the second volume. My definition of a villain is someone who harms or kills innocent others for their own selfish reasons and benefit. If that's not enough for you, you can call Ken an antihero, I don't really care. Other than that, I will go over what I said in my first review (which I will leave so you can read the 23 replies on it if you want although they will be summarized here). 1. Although MC is intelligent in general, understanding is the most important part of his intelligence. Understanding cultivation and techniques in order to improve them and advance fast. He doesn't know the future, and he is neither Kira nor Lelouch. 2. MC is still young and not immune to developing emotions toward others. Some are positive, some are negative. I do my best to develop his character in a unique and realistic way. 3. Companions - MC is not the only long-term character in the story. 4. Criticism - His villainous actions were quite sudden and came from nowhere. Irrelevant now after editing the first volume. 5. Criticism - Indeed, the first volume focuses on Ken's growth with limited action, especially towards its conclusion. However, subsequent volumes ramp up the action as he ventures out. I believe the first volume's depth in character development is just as captivating, even without the intense action, and it helps us get attached to Ken. 6. No romance, no harem. 7. While familiar cultivation concepts appear in the first volume, it's primarily focused on explaining the power system and sect structure, not assuming prior reader knowledge. In subsequent volumes, as the MC interacts more with the external world, the background and world-building become increasingly detailed and enriched. By the way, the volumes are short, four volumes over by chapter 190 or so. 8. If you're confused by the power system (which isn't too complicated), you can easily find a summary in the auxiliary chapter. Just don't read Ken's techniques which appear later if you don't want any spoilers. That's it for this review, I think I covered everything. Hope it wasn't unnecessarily long!

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