Review Detail of Branching_Spirit in Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

This novel has a very interesting concept. I love how the MC reincarnates through the ages within the same bloodline. Something that I would love to see would be some chapters on his past lives and connections he has made that have lasted till the present. Like forging alliances with magical races, advancements that he was apart of, Camelot, adventures he had before and after he founded House Reinhardt (like how he went to Greece or how he slayed a True Dragon), etc. He has a very big timeframe from 100,000 BCE-all the way to the present. There are plenty of things he can do in the magical world of Harry Potter. During one of his past lives, he could build a hidden sanctuary for magical creatures since he loves them so much. You could even add stuff from other novels to make it more challenging for him. Like fighting against the vampires from Twilight. There is a lot of historic events that you could make the MC apart of. . Now onto the critiques.. This novel has great potential…but there are plot holes and writing errors that need to be fixed. After this story has been revised by the author, I’m sure it will become an amazing work of fan fiction!