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Branching_Spirit2mthCommentedHe also doesn’t change his name until after saving Carne Village.
"Please rise Thoth, also, since you seem to be unaware, I have changed my name to Ainz Ooal Gown now, so refer to me as Ainz from this moment forward." Ainz then added: "Apologies for not informing you earlier or summoning you to the announcement, however, Albedo told me you were busy with another important task."- Branching_Spirit2mthCommented
It’s Hero Hero, not Buku who make one last visit to the tomb. Not sure if this is part of your own plot or not?? If it is, then just ignore me.
"Bukubukuchagama! It's been so long! How have you been?" - Branching_Spirit4mthCommented
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Persephone the Dread Queen: Despite popular belief Persephone isn't the Goddess of the Spring, rather this was a title bestowed upon her because Persephone' return from the Underworld symbolized the lessening of Demeter' wrath, leading to the ending of winter and the coming of spring. There are some versions of the mythos having Persephone predating Hades as a ruler of the Underworld by at least a thousand years and giving credit to the belief that the creation of Hades was most likely used as a way to make all the big three male. Persephone also has a lot of stories of her passing judgment on mortals she either favored or hated. Persephone unlike Hades was ruled by her emotions often making her capable of acting without thinking and being capable of being manipulated. This made people who sort something from the underworld only making their attempts when Persephone was present. Persephone was an exceedingly gorgeous Goddess, she was so beautiful her mother Demeter would hide her away from Olympus in fear of her fellow Gods reaction to it. Described as having the form of a tall young woman with an beautiful but pale face, her hair was dark and long that curled and flowed as if it was weightless. When within the Underworld her eyes took the color of an dying flower and held a haunted quality, whilst when in the overworld they shone with a healthy green glow like a flower during the bloom of spring. - Branching_Spirit8mthCommented
I think you should write more on his past lives and the impacts he created and left behind.
If you have any other recommendations for the story rewrite then please feel free to drop them either on this paragraph or the chapter comments! - Branching_Spirit8mthCommented
Go for it!
3. And finally, this is not really a question related to this story, but i wanted to see what y'alls opinion on a Pokémon fanfic set in a medieval setting, or an Au in a more realistic world vs a story following the canon world and making it more similar to how the anime, manga and games are? I've read quite a few Pokémon stories on this app and most of them take place in a more realistic AU, i have yet to see a medieval one though, but what im getting at is im trying to see what the opinion of other readers is. Im not saying i will make one, im just curious that's it - Branching_Spirit8mthCommented
I think it’s cool! He can build up something as the eons pass!
2. What is your thoughts on the whole bloodline reincarnation? would you rather i take a different approach to his reincarnations, or do you have any recommendations or critiques? - Branching_Spirit11mthCommented
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This novel has a very interesting concept. I love how the MC reincarnates through the ages within the same bloodline. Something that I would love to see would be some chapters on his past lives and connections he has made that have lasted till the present. Like forging alliances with magical races, advancements that he was apart of, Camelot, adventures he had before and after he founded House Reinhardt (like how he went to Greece or how he slayed a True Dragon), etc. He has a very big timeframe from 100,000 BCE-all the way to the present. There are plenty of things he can do in the magical world of Harry Potter. During one of his past lives, he could build a hidden sanctuary for magical creatures since he loves them so much. You could even add stuff from other novels to make it more challenging for him. Like fighting against the vampires from Twilight. There is a lot of historic events that you could make the MC apart of. . Now onto the critiques.. This novel has great potential…but there are plot holes and writing errors that need to be fixed. After this story has been revised by the author, I’m sure it will become an amazing work of fan fiction!
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What happened to going to the ancestral estate??
And we reached 500k views! thank you all so much for all of the continued support, you have no idea how much it means to me, and I appreciate all of you who soldiered through the early chapters, I wasn't quite sure where I was going to take the story and the MC so it was a weird limbo area, but now I know for sure where this is going and how the MC will act and grow so thank you all and I hope you enjoy this and all future chapters! - Branching_Spirit1yrCommented
Unless he needs more spending money for the revolution… 😜
`That is just wishful thinking, I don't think I will have time for that. Everything I will do after leaving Greenwood will be for the revolution, and unfortunately cocoa is not essential to it` - Branching_Spirit1yrPosted
The story is very good so far. I usually don’t leave reviews this early, but because of the plot and the amount of words in each chapter of this novel I am. New novels these days barely have enough words to make a chapter. This one on the other hand does, and the author does it well! 😁 To Author-San: I hope you continue on with this story and don’t lose interest, because this story of yours has the potential to be on of the great soiaf fanfictions!!!! 🙏🙏
- Branching_Spirit1yrCommentedCh 102 50 chapters have been added to patr eon, you can access them for only 1€.
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I don’t know, sounds pretty overpowered to me…
• Limitless Evolution. - Branching_Spirit2yrPosted
Love the novel so far! This is the first Overlord fanfic that I’ve read with an NPC as the protagonist! I love the backstory set up for it! I hope to read more on the backstory created by Tabula for the protagonist! Can’t wait for more chapters!!!!! 😁 Just hope this won’t become another harem story, though the thing with Shalltear wanting him to become part of her harem is funny though!