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Kuro_1545
Kuro_1545Lv126dKuro_1545

This rating is the equivalent of what i feel while reading this novel, this might seem harsh but these are the things i hated about this novel: the random authors note or explaining of things in the chapters, it breaks immersion and it is irritating when the flow of the story gets sidetracked because the authors doent know how to write those explanations organically in the story and just butts in. The authors notes at the ends of the story are so very irritating and they make me think that this author is an entitled narcissist with a god complex just because he wrote the novel (it lessens and belittles the characters in the novel). The author also introduces so many plot lines and characters to introduce mystery about the story but then says that the readers should forget about it, like whats the point of it then?. In summary, the story is good and has ootential but the pacing and random notes from the author breaks the story, its like the author backseats you while reading his novel and nobody lokes backseating

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

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DevilDarkness
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I'm sorry, but u got all that drama from reading just chapter one

senu19
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don't write reviews if u only read d first chapter, the story gets much better going on