It's not bad. You can read the other comments for good points.I was enjoying it until the introduction of the nightmares. From this point the author continues to bring up nightmares and flashbacks, but does not reveal what happened. Unfortunately, the answer is behind a paywall. For me, this was a deal breaker. How will you keep readers if you lock away what appears to be a key portion of the plot?Something else I didn't like was the info-dumps. It's too much irrelevant information to remember.
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LIKEHello Author, and thanks for the reply. I'm going to read some more on Panda.About which chapter did you end up revealing the traumatic event?
DevilDarkness:thanks for d review. as for ur questions or doubts u can ask me & I'll tell you here if you're curious about it. if not then, u can also read novel on pandanovel Or anywhere else - as long as I get d readers that's enough for me
never entirely. I've dropped it in pieces so everyone can understand what happened and what it all led to. but i didn't tell u about it from his pov in detail.. tho he's over it now
RainbowRoots:Hello Author, and thanks for the reply. I'm going to read some more on Panda.About which chapter did you end up revealing the traumatic event?