since this the first review, i'll be as positive as possible. The book has better start than the original which is understandable since it was your first time writting a book. There is little world building so i can't say much about it but so far so good. The writting quality is kinda of a mess since you give male characters a female pronouns (She/her) and female characters a male pronouns (he/his) but everything else is fine and mostly accurate, although it would've been better if you wrote the main characters scenes in first person's point of view(which is what you did in the original), like instead of writting Lucas it should be 'I' because it gives us the sense that we're experiencing what the protagonist is going through and know how he feels instead of it being narrated to us. lastly, and it's an problem for us readers of the old book, the updates are probably going to be 7 chapter a week, which is great for new readers but for us who knows close to 250 chapter ahead, it's leaves a lot to be desired and the amount of waiting we have to wait just for it to catch up is astonishing while also including the possibility of buying chapters that are almost the exact same as the original again is not satisfying. For a rewritten book it's a massive step up and as for a new book it's an excellent start that immediately makes you want to know what's next is going to happen.
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ya finally i was waiting for it for days haa 😁 i have question for author that does everything will be similar like previous book or there will be some changes like new friend or new love intrest
Well I hope the novel have a good and happy ending
