Item: Dance Of The Dragons
Rating: 4.6
Author: Troy_Dellinger

Troy_DellingerLv111yr

2024-04-22 03:15

I'm hooked 😁. I like how the writer build this story. The lore is established well and with such care. Instead of being lore-dumped at the beginning, the world is introduced *as needed* to the reader, so the reader know enough not to feel disconnected to the context, but not enough to feel like getting a history lesson. In a way, we learn about the world as Fengxi did, and it helps the reader to connect to main characters more. Character relationships are thankfully not rushed. The flow of the story so far (80 chapters in) unfolds in a balanced pace most of the time. The time skips can be a bit jarring, though, when it came to Wenyuan, as interaction with him is limited in exposure and just summed up to the pre-established lore, making connecting with him and his situation a bit hard (on top of the leads being interesting character already, lol). Also, this novel had the best translation I've read in here (pardon if this is not a translation) so far (at least in lgbt+ category). Barely any typos, weird grammar, or incorrect character ref which kinda bug me out when it happen too often within a chapter. So, I'm really enjoying my time reading. This is my first review ever, lol. Had to write it because this title deserve it 😁 for the amount of enjoyment I receive. I hope the quality stays until the end, or better yet, improves. Wish you all the best creator!

Dance Of The Dragons

Lu_Shui

4.8

546 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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Lu_ShuiAuthor

😭😭😭 I can't say enough how truly delightful it is to read a reader's review! First of all it is not a translation, hehehe~ Thank you for the compliments. This story has been in conception for a long, long time before I put it in writing. I was initially so worried about how to spoon-feed readers with the world background. So happy to hear that it all turned out pretty well to enhance your reading experience! Granted, I did not write much from Wenyuan's POV because I kinda hate him 💀 but as you read on, you will learn about his character more and more! Hope that you will read the book to the end, thank you for giving this novel a chance 💓💓💓

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