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Carlos_Balbizan
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2023-08-09 08:28

It would be a good story if there really was a sense of protagonism. Splitting the POVs by centering other people's point of view to take up more than 80% of the story is disastrous... No need for other people's POVs when this can be solved simply with third person POV, the author seems to want merge the concept of a novel with something like a book or movie, where there is not really a centralization of the characters in most cases. At least that's the point of view of someone who wouldn't even be able to identify the protagonist if the first 3 chapters are removed...

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