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Railvas
RailvasLv141yr
2023-04-05 19:11

The writing quality has really improved after the second chapter, making it much more flowing and easy to read. I respect how the author improved it after getting reviewed. I feel the story background is being built carefully and slowly, so you might want to read a few chapters to understand the story, the MC's background also seems interesting. The characters are hard-working, talented, and cheerful, I liked them. I hope you can continue the story, and I'd recommend it to anyone.

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Tianah_ann
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Thanks for the review🥰

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This is a really captivating story that will leave you wanting more. The characters are delightful and I really like the writing style of the author 1st person POV is my favourite. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up, author!

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The introduction of the lead's background and their feelings about leaving Maydawn Town and moving on to something new adds depth to the story. It makes me curious about what the lead's life was like in Maydawn and what their new life will entail. The mention of finally meeting his mother after years of being apart also adds intrigue and raises questions about their relationship and why they were separated. Recommended!

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