Review Detail of SightSeer in I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

I’ve read this story from when the highest chapter was 14, the story is interesting and the grammar and pacing are good but, there was a part which came out of nowhere. Some foreshadowing is needed and some parts of the story are explained and showed for longer than I would be interested in it Overall the story is good but the princess had like multiple chapters which showed her younger days when I hadn’t really known the character much yet.