Mmmmmmm dark chocolate.

Wait, when did i write this.

She touched his cheek.. how? He still has his mask on right?

How does he eat food with others? does he slightly open his mask and slide it into his mouth?

That’s alright, I was confused with the last plotline anyway.

Wait.. she died?

I have no idea what happened.

I’ve read this story from when the highest chapter was 14, the story is interesting and the grammar and pacing are good but, there was a part which came out of nowhere. Some foreshadowing is needed and some parts of the story are explained and showed for longer than I would be interested in it Overall the story is good but the princess had like multiple chapters which showed her younger days when I hadn’t really known the character much yet.

Ain’t she suffering from extensive blood loss?

From her arm.

HM.

Hmm.

Mm.

Nice.

Nice though things seemed to escalate to quickly, was there foreshadowing? I don’t remember I haven’t read this in a few months.

MMMMMMMM

HM MMMMMMMM

Mmmmmmm

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There no other people here but I would say the writings good, other than a few areas that could’ve been written is a smoother way the overall composition is pretty decent.