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SupremeDaoist2
SupremeDaoist2Lv31yr
2023-03-26 23:15

GREAT NOVEL, WRITING QUALITY IS GOOD, GRAMMER IS GOOD GREAT STORYLINE (THOUGH ITS COMMON), HIGHLTY RECOMMENDED. GOOD JOB AUTHOR, I AWAIT MORE CHAPTERS

DISCONTINUED/GETTING A REWRITE: I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

ThaiYaki
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ThaiYaki
ThaiYakiAuthor

If you guys have stumbled upon this I‘m so extremely happy beyond belief, I get extremely giddy when the view count goes up, it means my work has reached you guys. And I silently laugh with joy and gratefullness every time you guys save it to your library. I hope you guys enjoy Siun’s journey as much as I will enjoy sharing it to you guys!

1yr

LazyassSalted_Fish
LazyassSalted_FishLv4

The synopsis was interesting especially the part where the MC didn't want to lose his hair black color was super funny but relatable.

1yr
Marckaroni
MarckaroniLv3

The premise is intruiging and a unique concept with the MC dead set on not wanting to lose his obsidian hair color. The writing quality is good and the grammar consistent. I like the pace of how it is going since it is neither too fast nor too slow. Although the trope is relatively common right now, I do not mind it at all. I will be awaiting more chapters, Keep it up Author

1yr
Mich_ellle
Mich_ellleLv15

The story is so interesting. I am loving where the story is going and personally I think the Characters are great. The only thing is I wish it would update frequently. 😭🙌💕 The last update was around 3 months ago so hopefully soon in the future the Author will post some new Chapters. The story is very interesting and I’m excited to see where it goes. 💕💕💕

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SightSeer
SightSeerLv11

I’ve read this story from when the highest chapter was 14, the story is interesting and the grammar and pacing are good but, there was a part which came out of nowhere. Some foreshadowing is needed and some parts of the story are explained and showed for longer than I would be interested in it Overall the story is good but the princess had like multiple chapters which showed her younger days when I hadn’t really known the character much yet.

1yr
shreya_ki
shreya_kiLv3

The conversation between Siun and Tex were funny. I especially loved the character of this story. waiting for more chapters.[img=recommend]

1yr
Cobruh
CobruhLv1

It's a great novel, my only complaint would be that the time progression is a little fast and I personally prefer more attention to detail. Other than that it was really great keep it up!

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