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AceAmbrosiaLv131yr
2023-03-25 09:18

The story itself is amazing, I must say. The writing quality is thorough, and works to describe each part of the settings accurately. A piece of advice would be to work on the sudden "tense" switch in the first chapter from present-tense to past-tense. Otherwise, the novel itself is wonderful. Keep up the good work, author!

Secrets Unveiled: The Love Story of Lucien and Vivienne

Abysalyounglord
4.7
115 Chs

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Reveries_Lv3

it was very nice with everything.. specially your writing quality😍. I love it waiting for next chapter 💜💜

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AbysalyounglordAuthor

Hi, this is the author. Thank you for taking the time to read my novel. This is my second novel, and I hope that this time, I won't fall short and will produce a wonderful story. So please continue to give me your support. Thank you.

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Kashin_sanLv3

I am really curious though, what both the protagonist are hidding from each other. Their interaction, the way they both subconsiously let each other enter their life and heart. I want to see more romance moment between the both, but also like how the author is taking it slow, growing the feeling gradually. Keep up the job, Author!!

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MarckaroniLv3

The premise of the story is intruiging and got me curious on how the relationship between the two will continue. I like the pace as it isn’t fast and the writing quality is good. The story is unique and thats something rare on webnovel which I greatly appreciate. Besides the sometimes extremely long paragraphs there is nothing I can point out. Great job author

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Nonik_FarellidzyLv3

this is very good with early shown the roles of the characters. I'm curious how each of the characters will fare here. 🙂❤️

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Teddy_writeLv2

wow such a nice book. I love everything about it, starting from the characters settings, the plot everything. keep it up author

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FightLoveSystemLv13

Great! I just like how the author describes every single thing for readers to understand. I like this novel Romance with a touch of Future. Kudos to the Author🤗

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SupremeDaoist2Lv3

GREAT NOVEL! IT'S REALLY AMAZING ESPECIALLY THE STORY DEVELOPMENT. ALL IN ALL, IT'S JUST WONDERFUL. I CAN'T TO SEE WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT

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MonarchTheFirstLv1

This is a wonderful story; it would do with more interactions between characters instead of the narrator telling us what happens in the scene. But it makes up for shortcomings in the wonderful world building and intriguing plot.

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HeartzDiaryLv2

The storyline is amazing and the concept... expecting more to come.

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