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OldFellow
OldFellowLv146mthOldFellow

Sounded interesting in the summary, though, after reading a few chapters i cant get interested enough in the MC to continue, but the biggest probem for me is the world building, even if the story is 2000 years in the future humanity stagnated in the 20th century, no matter how much you want to play victim and blame the world technology will aways bleed through all layers of society (just not a the same time) if not for the simple fact that we live in a capitalist economy (the same reason slavery ceased to exist, money trumps everything), so in summary the impression i have is that victim mentality not only shaped the MC but also the World

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The Earth After Rebirth

Arrkein

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Arrkein
ArrkeinAuthorArrkein

not sure I understand what you tryna say but thanks for reading.

OldFellow
OldFellowLv14OldFellow

First, Sorry if it came out as confusing or agressive, the impression i have is that you created a world where people with less means live in year 4000 the same as they would in the 2000s, when after thousands of years of innovation they should live like high income people do by our standards at least, the same way that most population today lives way better than any king hundreds of years ago, from my point of view it seems you wanted to create a dark world with class strugle and used this premisse as a base for the world building, but the way i see it, although class strugle would of course exist it would be so different from what we are used today that almost no one would be able to relate

Arrkein:not sure I understand what you tryna say but thanks for reading.
Arrkein
ArrkeinAuthorArrkein

Oh, I see. Thanks for clarifying. The world I'm writing may have our world as the base but it isn't supposed to mirror it, or mirror what the world and humans would be 3000 years from now. Now, I don't know where you stopped reading but their current world suffered a near extinction, that's enough to set the world back centuries if not millennia. Yes they have the tech but they are still very much human, I'm tryna flash out human greed here, whether it's exaggerated or not. In our world, it's only conspiracy that the poor are being kept poor. But in this one, it is something of a fact, there are men behind the curtain. And they are using their power for far sinister things.

OldFellow:First, Sorry if it came out as confusing or agressive, the impression i have is that you created a world where people with less means live in year 4000 the same as they would in the 2000s, when after thousands of years of innovation they should live like high income people do by our standards at least, the same way that most population today lives way better than any king hundreds of years ago, from my point of view it seems you wanted to create a dark world with class strugle and used this premisse as a base for the world building, but the way i see it, although class strugle would of course exist it would be so different from what we are used today that almost no one would be able to relate