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Bunny_s_sweet_chim
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2023-04-20 21:57

Omo Omo A new book A new start A new drama *sigh* and a new crazy MC I really liked the MC coz he is....stupid yeah but he so cute and *drools*hot😍 And don't get me starting on the ML white/silver hair and purple eyes are just my type😍 I am telling you truth author your work relaxes my stress from all the homework and busy school day (I am in 12th class and the pressure in 12th class is horrible) Reading your work does wonders to me srsly❤ And I really liked this book's setting and the world background is so well explained and established And I hope we can see character development from the MC's side in the future cuz as much as I like his cute&naive side I still hope the MC get better understanding of the nightmare cycle amd the normal world too if possible If possible I hope our tiny ML can help MC through the hard times ML will face sometimes Lots of virtual love from your faraway land fan❤❤

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delanasiwarka
delanasiwarkaAuthor

thank you so much for this lovely review bunny!! 😆❤️✨ I'm so glad that my book can bring a little joy to your life! good luck with your class! ✊😤

Bunny_s_sweet_chim
Bunny_s_sweet_chimLv4

delanasiwarka:thank you so much for this lovely review bunny!! 😆❤️✨ I'm so glad that my book can bring a little joy to your life! good luck with your class! ✊😤
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KajFinch1
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First off, if you are hesitating to read this story then stop. Because you will be the only one missing out on something amazing. From someone who has read up to chapter 66, this story is truly great in my opinion. The mystery. The horror. The characters. The Tension! Wow. As I continued reading, each of these made it harder and harder to not finish. And as the type of reader who chooses to wait until a good amount of chapters are available. This book made it nearly impossible. Making me frustrated during the wait and also joyful and excited after a chapter was released. Hopefully, you’ll understand my troubles and delights. Choosing to travel on this crazy roller coaster of a story with us. Still not convinced? Great, I still have a lot to say. The beginning of the first chapter was a little slow and confusing for me. Mainly because it sets up so much great stuff that made the chapters after all the more enjoyable. One of my favorite things about this book is the mystery and the horror. Being new to the genre, this book really showed me what I was missing. I loved the feeling of uncertainty and fear the book gave me. Not for myself but for the fate of the characters whose lives weren’t secure. After learning to love them, reading sometimes became difficult when something unpredictable and dangerous happened. It forced me to storm up my own theories of what may occur and question if they would make it out in one piece or die trying. Were my theories right? Some. Where most completely wrong? Yes, yes they were. But that was okay because it made the tension thicker and the characters all the more interesting! My favorite thing about this book, however, is the main characters. I really love the idea of the other characters getting a lot of story time to but so far Jin Juichi and Shen Nianzu are my favorite. Jin Juichi is a unique and loveable MC that makes me hate him and love him for the strain he puts on my heart. One minute I can be laughing my butt off over something he does then tearing up when he gets sad and the next clutching my chest in fear after he gets in a dangerous situation. The man really does a number on me. Especially when he is described by Nian after he does something hot or shameless. Trust me when you read it you will understand. Also don’t gasp as loud as I did when you do. Having to shield your phone from innocent eyes. And author keep doing what you are doing. Just amazing. Everyone loves a little detail! New readers you’ll also understand this to if you read it so please do. For Shen Nianzu. Gosh, he’s amazing! I love the mystery behind him and how skillful he is. Love to see a powerful couple. My favorite thing about him is how he reacts to everything Jin Juichi does and says. Which is very funny. Jin Juichi is a handful so I understand. I like it a lot when he comments on Jui Juichi appearance and gets shocked when Juichi does something inappropriate but continues to shamelessly look anyways. I can’t wait to learn more about him and watch him continue to be a bad a**. Overall this story is amazing and is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Everyone’s opinions are subjective but with everything I’ve said I hope you can a least give it a try. Please read and support!

SaLad57
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WHAT AN ASTOUNDING, THRILLING, MARVELOUS, SPECTACULAR, MIND-BLOWING STORY THIS IS! there are no words of how I can express how exceedingly I love this novel. How the monsters were described and Yes- I can feel the suspense and thrill radiating through my screen that I couldn't help but tuck myself in the blanket and hide (⁠^⁠~⁠^⁠;⁠)⁠ゞ I can be scaredy cat sometimes so pls bear with me (⁠•⁠ ⁠▽⁠ ⁠•⁠;⁠) however, that's not all! I extremely love how the characters interact with each other. this is not those "love at first sight" then they start dating-the author first built trust! TRUST! GUYS! I have read novels where they starts dating first the gets bombarded with misunderstandings all because they don't trust they're partner and ugh... so annoying...ヘ⁠(⁠。⁠□⁠°⁠)⁠ヘ And aye! it's slow-burn, but that's the fun of it! How they first built this relationship as a shaky bridge to a steady one where there's no doubt they would fight for the other. Although, I got to say *cough sometimes I can feel the tension even from here *cough 🤧 our MC doesn't know anything about romance but trust me, his a natural😉😜 Every morning I wake up and saw there's an updated to this novel makes me happy the entire day knowing the MC will cheer me up with his silly antics and the ML getting frustrated but indulging to our MC. Hehe... they're so sweet~ Guaranteed Diabetes plus spiciness!If that's all up to your taste then readd thissssss! try itttt~~! I'm sure you will love it!Thank you so much author for this wonderful story you brought to my monotonous world... (⁠♡⁠ω⁠♡⁠ ⁠)⁠ ⁠~⁠♪

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