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KajFinch1Lv141yr
2023-05-26 02:07

First off, if you are hesitating to read this story then stop. Because you will be the only one missing out on something amazing. From someone who has read up to chapter 66, this story is truly great in my opinion. The mystery. The horror. The characters. The Tension! Wow. As I continued reading, each of these made it harder and harder to not finish. And as the type of reader who chooses to wait until a good amount of chapters are available. This book made it nearly impossible. Making me frustrated during the wait and also joyful and excited after a chapter was released. Hopefully, you’ll understand my troubles and delights. Choosing to travel on this crazy roller coaster of a story with us. Still not convinced? Great, I still have a lot to say. The beginning of the first chapter was a little slow and confusing for me. Mainly because it sets up so much great stuff that made the chapters after all the more enjoyable. One of my favorite things about this book is the mystery and the horror. Being new to the genre, this book really showed me what I was missing. I loved the feeling of uncertainty and fear the book gave me. Not for myself but for the fate of the characters whose lives weren’t secure. After learning to love them, reading sometimes became difficult when something unpredictable and dangerous happened. It forced me to storm up my own theories of what may occur and question if they would make it out in one piece or die trying. Were my theories right? Some. Where most completely wrong? Yes, yes they were. But that was okay because it made the tension thicker and the characters all the more interesting! My favorite thing about this book, however, is the main characters. I really love the idea of the other characters getting a lot of story time to but so far Jin Juichi and Shen Nianzu are my favorite. Jin Juichi is a unique and loveable MC that makes me hate him and love him for the strain he puts on my heart. One minute I can be laughing my butt off over something he does then tearing up when he gets sad and the next clutching my chest in fear after he gets in a dangerous situation. The man really does a number on me. Especially when he is described by Nian after he does something hot or shameless. Trust me when you read it you will understand. Also don’t gasp as loud as I did when you do. Having to shield your phone from innocent eyes. And author keep doing what you are doing. Just amazing. Everyone loves a little detail! New readers you’ll also understand this to if you read it so please do. For Shen Nianzu. Gosh, he’s amazing! I love the mystery behind him and how skillful he is. Love to see a powerful couple. My favorite thing about him is how he reacts to everything Jin Juichi does and says. Which is very funny. Jin Juichi is a handful so I understand. I like it a lot when he comments on Jui Juichi appearance and gets shocked when Juichi does something inappropriate but continues to shamelessly look anyways. I can’t wait to learn more about him and watch him continue to be a bad a**. Overall this story is amazing and is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Everyone’s opinions are subjective but with everything I’ve said I hope you can a least give it a try. Please read and support!

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*gasp* oh my gawd thank you so so much for this detailed and amazing review 😭😭 I can't stop reading them over and over again! So glad that you enjoy the story~

KajFinch1Lv14

Your welcome! It is well deserved. Thank you!😂

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