Bro finally.. someone made a mc that has a Hamon... hamon Is so underrated (in my opinion)

is was good and all in the previous chapter then suddenly the mc said a taboo of all reincarnator telling their past life

The writing quality of the story is good, although there are some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. In terms of story development, there is too much romance. While I understand that it falls under the slice-of-life genre, since the author included an action tag, there should be a balance between romance and action. As it stands, the excessive romance makes it boring for me, so I would rate it 3 stars ⭐. The characters are well-designed, especially the main character (MC). He is calm, smart, and respected. However, there are instances where he goes overboard with his romance/love for Mitsuri. For example, when he says, "I don't want other people to see your smile," it comes across as possessive. Despite this, I still like the characters, so I would rate it 4 stars ⭐. The world background is well-developed, and the author has put effort into providing detailed descriptions. I would rate it 5 stars ⭐. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5 stars) Regarding the updating stability, it should be noted that the updates for this fanfic are slow. However, considering that it is a fanfiction and provided to readers for free, I would still give it a 5-star rating. The author's efforts and dedication to continuing the story despite the slow updates deserve appreciation. In summary, I enjoy the story overall, but the heavy focus on slice-of-life elements and excessive romance make it boring for me at times. The pacing can also be inconsistent, with moments of slow and fast pace. Since it's only 13 chapters long, I will reserve my final judgment until it reaches 30 chapters, at which point I will provide another review.

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The interactions and setting were really nice and look forward to more. Though hope it won't go down the edgy revenge route.

To good to be true, shame to be honest. If you guys prefer this type of plot/stories then go ahead, it's good. I won't tell you guys why i give it a low rating because i want you guys to read it yourself. All in all its a good ff, the idea is there no doubt about it but the prosecution(is this the correct word to use here?) is bad. But i kinda get it from the point of view of the author.

Man, the writing in webnovels is dreadful, and I'm sick of this garbage. The fact that this book was written by a third-grader is one of its strengths.

Sur une échelle de 1 à 10 on est 9 au niveau du cringe 😬 , relation forcée trop robotique. Tomber amoureux en 1 chapitre, c'est d'un ridicule à en faire rougir les clowns. Sans compter le développement inexistant de personnage, le passé du protagoniste inconnu en une dizaine de chapitres alors que 5 lignes d'intro auraient suffit au début, l'apparence du protagoniste inconnue aussi on sait juste qu'il est basique avec une présence chaleureuse. Et la manière dont il parle de la femme est écoeurante, on dirait un contrôle maniac chinois des nombreux MTL. En bref passez votre chemin et ne tombez pas dans le panneau des autres review elles sont Fake pour la plupart.

It’s Ight. An ok read if you don’t mind grammar that looks like it was written by a 3rd grader. Romance feels forced and rushed.