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trueidiocy_577
trueidiocy_577Lv41yr
2023-05-27 01:17

So basically an OC? With original progression based on Ink Clan, etc?

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Shurry
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"So basically an OC?" Yes "With original progression based on Ink Clan, etc?" Very close, he has to follow the same principles as the human race. However, it's more focused around a blend of sorts.

Hunter_69
Hunter_69Lv13

Oc harem is trash.. what's the point when og story has so many women.. we are reading your wet dream of harem.. trash. I lost my interest in seeing trash OC. no wonder this ff isn't that popular even with a lot of chaps

Shurry:"So basically an OC?" Yes "With original progression based on Ink Clan, etc?" Very close, he has to follow the same principles as the human race. However, it's more focused around a blend of sorts.
Shurry
ShurryAuthor

Sorry you feel the need to hate on a harem story like this. I wonder what chapter you made it to, though, since from your comment, it seems to suggest you don't understand the actual point of the story. Hint: It's not the wives. As for the point of the OC to have a harem, aside from the fact I already went over the exact reason in the story. It's only fair for him to have a harem with the stuff he can do.

Hunter_69:Oc harem is trash.. what's the point when og story has so many women.. we are reading your wet dream of harem.. trash. I lost my interest in seeing trash OC. no wonder this ff isn't that popular even with a lot of chaps
Aun_Aqeel
Aun_AqeelLv4

Will any of the girls from the original story be part of the mc harem

Shurry:Sorry you feel the need to hate on a harem story like this. I wonder what chapter you made it to, though, since from your comment, it seems to suggest you don't understand the actual point of the story. Hint: It's not the wives. As for the point of the OC to have a harem, aside from the fact I already went over the exact reason in the story. It's only fair for him to have a harem with the stuff he can do.
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

Agreed. Anybody who used oc harem instead of og is brain dead

Hunter_69:Oc harem is trash.. what's the point when og story has so many women.. we are reading your wet dream of harem.. trash. I lost my interest in seeing trash OC. no wonder this ff isn't that popular even with a lot of chaps
BS2L2024
BS2L2024Lv3

Stop wasting your time and go back to your Edgy wish fullfillment then.

Spabsta:Agreed. Anybody who used oc harem instead of og is brain dead
OtakuSad0
OtakuSad0Lv3

it's just the truth after all, at least most people want to see how the og females relationship with OC MC will be, but of course a small portion of readers also like oc harem

BS2L2024:Stop wasting your time and go back to your Edgy wish fullfillment then.
DaoistJhtAYc
DaoistJhtAYcLv4

Honestly can’t completely agree with this. For one most women yet readers would want the oc to be with are the ones Yang Kai married in the original story and since this one starts during the time we find out so they Ink Clan it automatically eliminates what random readers would want to see. Going from this point this harem isn’t even oc for real since they are plenty of characters from the original story that join they are just character most people forget exist. The last point is why not add oc women into the harem? It’s literally the whole point of fanfics, for the fan to creator their own fiction inside an already established universe/story, that’s not counting the fact that it’s harder to write/creator a whole new character that still fits within the bounds of the chosen fiction universe than it is to use a character that have already been fleshed out by a professional writer.

Spabsta:Agreed. Anybody who used oc harem instead of og is brain dead
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