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StyxR
StyxRLv141yr
2023-06-27 15:07

The grammar is good, so this is easy to read. Some of the character changes come off a little forced or cringy but not a huge issue. I think my only real complaint is the OC's overwhelming need to be morally right. Basically he's poor magic Batman.

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189 Chs

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crinix
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I've read about 3 to 4 chp... couldn't read any further. There are just too many things going around and no explanation, like there is no MC background story for...it gives you the feeling like you are starting your story from middle of the book. I think MC already has a love interest and we have got no explanation how they met or anything, and the jokes are lame and MC can't even converse without joking around. Sorry not for me.

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Poisontester
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Man author really doesn’t want mc to grow up, everything in novel felt great but mc just have to be a idiot having no kill policy when his enemies are killing his students infront of him.

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AarconReix
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readable but full of pot holes. . . . . . I mean, its alright 🤣🤣🤣

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ntw_ff
ntw_ffLv11

this story started off so good and was really looking forward to the rest of it and then the mc became a p***y out of nowhere and it completly ruined the story for me ...and if that was bad enough bringing hermoine to kamar-taj sealed it dropping this at chapter 54. it started good and just got worse as time went on

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Tunic01
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Basically the only thing this book has going for it is comedy and even that's starting to die out, so like the only reason I'm even continuing is it's Monkeys book.

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CandyChopper
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Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐ Total 2.8 This is just canon with extra character nothing changes author doesn't want to change anything major or small.

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Ballad
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Hm, Not gonna lie this is probably the worst monkey fic I've read. I'm just not vibing at all with this character he's a complete joke and not the funny one.

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accidentaljihad
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Surprisingly good, the first few chapters are a bit confusing but not bad tbh, after that it really gets going and you find out more about the world in quite satisfying ways

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara
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While it contains the usual monkey biz our man shouldn't write any hero complexes anymore as his moral grey style bleeds through and just makes this an absolute irritant for me due to how conflicting his personality feels at times.

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i am very bad at writing rewievs, but this story is surprisingly very good. waiting for new chapters

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