Tried to stick this one out, but it is pretty bad when it comes to character design/development and providing a well thought out, planned world, economy and power system. The sheer amount of inconsistencies and annoying oversights is staggering. MC is a orphan since he can remember and has a younger sister type to support who is in the same boat.. neither have anyone else to look out for them or teach them what's needed but from age 5 they have managed to survive, learned a relatively high standard of speech/manners as well as the ability to read 🙄 I could rant for a while about all the other idiotic antics like MC throwing money around like a young spoiled Noble or the fact he cares not about making money and is insanely wasteful BUT if you decide to read this you will quickly see for yourself I guess 🤷🏻♂️ Do yourself a favour and skip this. I can only hope the author reads through the comments left throughout the novel so far and makes notes of the readers pain points and think about how he can fix this
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