Review Detail of Riley_23 in Rhapsody Of The Otherworld

I read all the seven available chaps and I thought I should give this one a review. Writing Quality: 4/5 There were grammar issues here and there and the pacing was a bit confusing at the start but I didn't mind that so much since I kind of understood it the more I read. My tip for the author would be to minimize expositions and to cut off or shorten unnecessary stuff that doesn't further the plot. For example on Chapter 3 when he was cooking potato. It would be better to shorten that one up. I like sliceoflife but I prefer it to be about the mc. Not a potato. Stability of Updates: 5/5 I checked the table of contents and the author seemed to upload multiple chapters a day. Keep it up, author. Story Development: 4/5 I'll rate it four for now since we are still early in the story. But it seemed to be progressing fast. I'm guessing we'll see action scenes in chap 10. Character Design: 4/5 Too early to tell so I will rate it four for now. World Background: 4/5 Nothing much was mentioned yet but I am guessing it's gonna be huge. All in all, this is a fun harem story some of you might be interested in. The author was still new and I believe he/she will keep improving . Have a great day!!