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Sapphire_AceLv31yr
2023-07-07 07:22

This story has kept my interest, will be adding and keeping in my library.Everything is decently put together, the only thing is despite already reading six chapters I have no idea what any characters look like besides Vasilis and Roman, and Jade, just a little bit. (ik she's ridiculously tall and tan)

Bloodstone Academy

Harleeyah24
4.7
104 Chs

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Harleeyah24
Harleeyah24Author

Thank you for your insight! And, I understand what you mean, but the characters get more visual descriptions as the story progresses. Since Jade is the main character, and a large portion of the story is told in her POV, we see things mostly as she sees them. And It’s weird for her to just randomly describe her own appearance😂 so we get to see what she looks like through other characters’ POV’s.

1yr
Sapphire_Ace
Sapphire_AceLv3

i suppose that is true!

Harleeyah24:Thank you for your insight! And, I understand what you mean, but the characters get more visual descriptions as the story progresses. Since Jade is the main character, and a large portion of the story is told in her POV, we see things mostly as she sees them. And It’s weird for her to just randomly describe her own appearance😂 so we get to see what she looks like through other characters’ POV’s.
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Harleeyah24
Harleeyah24Author

Hello! Author here! We’re almost at 20 chapters and I figured I‘d share a few words before we progress further. So, I understand that a few of the beginning chapters, aside from the prologue, might feel a bit draggy and slow and that might discourage some readers. But I promise, those chapters are absolutely important, or I would not put them in. They’re necessary for a better understanding of the plot and I implore you to please, not be discouraged. The plot picks up pace soon after chapter 3, and if you truly liked the first chapter, then I promise the rest of the book will not disappoint you. So stick around and revel in the beauty of this dark, dangerous fictional world with me! Thank you! With love always, -Aleeyah<3

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Chocolatefudge29
Chocolatefudge29Lv2

A second review because I’ve read more chapters of this book and it’s so deserving!!! Okay so, after the prologue, the first 4-ish chapters are not as action-packed and seem kinda slow, but it picks up almost immediately after and I realize that those chapters were kinda important to create a base knowledge/familiarity with the fmc, Jade, and the dynamics of her life and her complicated relationship with her parents. The story progresses greatly after that and I just NEED more chapters like immediately!!!!!!!

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Chocolatefudge29
Chocolatefudge29Lv2

I’m super duper excited for this! Story progression is nice from the opening and I’m hoping the plot will pick up pace in the next couple of chapters! Good job!

1yr
Zurbluris
ZurblurisLv13

Good to see a Nigerian author here, good luck

1yr
Bluereader_019
Bluereader_019Lv1

This book is really different. The complexities of the main characters relationship is intriguing. I was quite drawn to some of the characters and I like how I feel about them. I would recommend this book to anyone anytime any day. The fact the story has super natural beings really makes me want it to become a movie 😊. My imagination about this book is at it's best, feels like I'm in the book. Keep it up 👍🏾

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BlueJeans
BlueJeansLv3

This is an early review.First of all, I don't think I ever read something with the similiar setting. Although it reminded me with Harry Potter a little bit.The story is interesting, there are quite a bit sus character as I read the story because I don't trust anybody in this unfamiliar place.I could relate with the protagonist circumtances because I had similiar experience. It's tiring and the way author picture the emotion is on point.There are many things for development in this book. Since I haven't read until the latest chapter, I wonder if there are some bloody scene or killing🤭It give me Danganronpa vibes with the academy. Well but I guess it is not like that.Im excited to dive deeper inside the story.

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ToshiroOne
ToshiroOneLv2

This is so underrated more people need to see this novel easy 10/10 great read love Jade character. keep up the great work author and keep updating :)

1yr
Crown_Nyx
Crown_NyxLv13

The story progression is nice. The characters got life and color looking forward for your work. Needs more stable updates tho! Good luck author!

1yr
CosmicArchmage
CosmicArchmageLv2

The story is quite intriguing and starts off strong. The characters' personalities are well-crafted, to the point where I felt genuine hatred towards Soren. You have an intense and exciting writing style. The dialogues are vivid and full of emotion, making it an enjoyable novel.

1yr
Khaluchi_8941
Khaluchi_8941Lv2

Eiii. I'm finding it so difficult to set this book down! Love love the characters and the tension around them. I can't wait to read more till my eyes fall out of their sockets. Great job, Author!

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