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Duke_AsmodeusAuthor1yr
2023-04-01 23:07

Shameless Review, The novel combines romance, mystery, action and adult themes into a mixture of mature and light-hearted moments with a long story-driven tale. It follows the world of a half-orc who takes the adventurer name Raven in memory of his late mother. He will use a 2 handed axe as his main weapon and cultivates a mysterious dual cultivation technique for monsters, becoming a Chimera. If you enjoy beautiful monsters, girls, hot-blooded action, and intense and passionate lemons, try it. The world's lore is deep; even the most subordinate characters have a story and their agency in the novel; the main character doesn't control the world, nor will it rotate around him. His heroines will have their thoughts, feelings and choices when faced with the same problems, leading to weaving and intertwined paths. I can only post 1 chapter daily due to my other novels, thus marking it down to 4 stars. Please enjoy, and feel free to ask any questions!

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legendary_awesomeLv11

A question I have, is the mc a goodie two shoes or is he ruthless.

Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

He's an adult, meaning he's ruthless when needed, but he isn't an edge lord who kills people for nothing. Should someone get up in his face or cause problems, male or female? Our half-Orc boy would smack them so hard they might lose a few teeth or worse. If he were given a tag, it would probably be closer to the grey area and nearing a villain due to his race and the women he will meet/eventually care for. Initially, he is rather stoic and easygoing but will change as things progress.

legendary_awesome:A question I have, is the mc a goodie two shoes or is he ruthless.
Romance_guyLv14

How many in the harem ?

Duke_Asmodeus:He's an adult, meaning he's ruthless when needed, but he isn't an edge lord who kills people for nothing. Should someone get up in his face or cause problems, male or female? Our half-Orc boy would smack them so hard they might lose a few teeth or worse. If he were given a tag, it would probably be closer to the grey area and nearing a villain due to his race and the women he will meet/eventually care for. Initially, he is rather stoic and easygoing but will change as things progress.
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

1 for each gate of his cultivation technique as the main heroines. He will sleep with more, though; they are just sub heroines, though.

Romance_guy:How many in the harem ?
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hello, any kind of yuri in the harem?

Duke_Asmodeus:1 for each gate of his cultivation technique as the main heroines. He will sleep with more, though; they are just sub heroines, though.
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Nope, or I'd have the tag just in case.

Daoist_Culture:Hello, any kind of yuri in the harem?
Daoist_CultureLv15

Thanks for the info

Duke_Asmodeus:Nope, or I'd have the tag just in case.
ruined_skyLv15

havent read this yet but an author who actually answers questions has my respect

Duke_Asmodeus:He's an adult, meaning he's ruthless when needed, but he isn't an edge lord who kills people for nothing. Should someone get up in his face or cause problems, male or female? Our half-Orc boy would smack them so hard they might lose a few teeth or worse. If he were given a tag, it would probably be closer to the grey area and nearing a villain due to his race and the women he will meet/eventually care for. Initially, he is rather stoic and easygoing but will change as things progress.
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

I can't improve without all of your feedback, good and bad. it would just be the same thing if I relied on my echo chamber haha.

ruined_sky:havent read this yet but an author who actually answers questions has my respect
Shaq_FuLv15

yeah was going to try it, but u lost me at side charchters having thier own stories, and the world doesnt revolve around the mc. everything else sounded perfect tho. i might put up with a few chapters around other charcters, but yeah not gonna waste coins on an endless meangless side stories that i practicly care nothing about, and probibly wont remember the passed thuer meting with the mc. good luck tho sounds like a story i realky wanna read the mcs journy only.

Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

There aren't any; they just won't be 2d cardboard cutouts. In the 101 chapters, there were 0 side character chapters, but jog on; it's your loss, not mine. You posted this before reading the 40 free chapters, to make sure, which is quite silly. The World not revolving around him means that not everything goes accordingly to his will, as in the world is alive, not some plastic 2d world where they all wait in darkness until he shows up. I'm unsure why you misunderstood badly. Again, your loss, not mine.

Shaq_Fu:yeah was going to try it, but u lost me at side charchters having thier own stories, and the world doesnt revolve around the mc. everything else sounded perfect tho. i might put up with a few chapters around other charcters, but yeah not gonna waste coins on an endless meangless side stories that i practicly care nothing about, and probibly wont remember the passed thuer meting with the mc. good luck tho sounds like a story i realky wanna read the mcs journy only.
SoBoredLv15

What happened to your vampire novel

Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Being reimagined with a new successor as I was too much of a novice when I wrote it and wrote myself into a corner.

SoBored:What happened to your vampire novel
SoBoredLv15

Ok but did you have to delete it’s so sad

Duke_Asmodeus:Being reimagined with a new successor as I was too much of a novice when I wrote it and wrote myself into a corner.
Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

That was an accident; it is temporarily hidden as I used Chinese characters to hide another novel but put them on test one by mistake!

SoBored:Ok but did you have to delete it’s so sad
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Krozam_00Lv4

Sounds interesting, but dude, your synopsis is long enough to serve as a prologue... 😂

RapidReader1993Lv15

Is there a discord with pics for this story? If so what is it?

Duke_AsmodeusAuthor

Check my profile

RapidReader1993:Is there a discord with pics for this story? If so what is it?
AnubeseteshLv15

hey just got recommend the novel. just Wondering why half-orc and manticore? usually Dragons reign as top beings followed by pheonix and serpents etc. manticore being a chimera beast is an interesting take. just wondering why? also.....I'm a fan of lycanthropic species (dragon shifters, lycans, werewolves etc) are these present too?

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