Review Detail of Nightwolf98 in This isn't High School DxD, damn it!

Advice !!! 1. don't make pokemon harem because they have no influence on the story and you have to write down their emotions and personalities, points of view _______________________________________ 2. write down the world in which mc is and what influence it has on the world _______________________________________ 3.you need to write a mc that has its own point of view and possible character changes _______________________________________ 4.Mc doesn't always have to win, he must also have difficulties because if he always wins, it gets boring and this is also the possibility of his character's development _______________________________________ 5. and if possible, change the character of other characters in the story, e.g. bad and good _______________________________________ 6. don't make this harem don't have thoughts of their own that mc treats them as objects and doesn't care about their feelings, so they can have their feelings faded and they can go or come back and this is the growth of mc and heroins