Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars, but that's not a claim that it's worth that much. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)

I normally dont go out of my way to review a story at its starting point, but im too hooked and author promised more motivation for reviews: I love it, good pacing, likable protagonist ans marvelous grammer and writing! plain and simple review! :)

The fic is great author san,Mobuseka fics are like very rare I think I only read one before this one but wasnt that good.Hopeto see more chapters in future,you have my support and stones.

Advice !!! 1. don't make pokemon harem because they have no influence on the story and you have to write down their emotions and personalities, points of view _______________________________________ 2. write down the world in which mc is and what influence it has on the world _______________________________________ 3.you need to write a mc that has its own point of view and possible character changes _______________________________________ 4.Mc doesn't always have to win, he must also have difficulties because if he always wins, it gets boring and this is also the possibility of his character's development _______________________________________ 5. and if possible, change the character of other characters in the story, e.g. bad and good _______________________________________ 6. don't make this harem don't have thoughts of their own that mc treats them as objects and doesn't care about their feelings, so they can have their feelings faded and they can go or come back and this is the growth of mc and heroins

Whole thing is treated like he isnt part of the world. Ik he doesnt want to be there but he has parent and a new name there but mc is like nope. Use my ian as name even tho everyone calls him that worlds name. Mc is just treating it puke nothing real. This is main problem with world hoping ffs in general. No real character growth and barley anything really original going on. Author hates on negative comments when most may not be worded politely but alot speak the truth. Hope some like it but mc and world hoping and how he treats his predicament ruins it

To begin with, I want to say that it is my opinion based on the fact that if I follow both the web novel and the light novel, I did not only watch the anime, that being said, it is a terrible story, I do not recommend it to anyone. The problem with this story is that the author has not read anything about the conflict and the background of the world, added to the fact that his mc's attitude is horrible, it seems that he has identity problems and his only reason for existing is to do what he orders the system you have. There are things that the author does well but they are very small. I advise you to rewrite this story after getting better information, as well as defining a single personality for the protagonist.

Well, the main problems of this story is that the protagonist keeps complaining without knowing anything about the background of what he is talking about, an attitude of everything makes me lazy, which is very irritating, his communication skills are very low and the plot is move. seek to please the system

I saw the cover with the images of Olivia and Ange, so if it's what I'm thinking, you deserve all [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]my respect

Indonesia Inggris wkwkwk.... sangat bagus author.. apalagi saya juga salah satu penggemar novel ini..... dan saya juga sedikit kesal dengan tokoh utamanya yang sangat padat dan terlalu bertele-tele,, walaupun pada akhirnya dia tetap membantu permasalahan si Heroine itu...... saya harap si ratu milaine bisa jadi waifu utamanya 😂 yah...saya tidak peduli yang penting saya nantikan alur ceritanya Hahaha.... very good author.. Moreover, I am also a fan of this novel. and I'm also a little annoyed with the main character who is very dense and too long-winded,, even though in the end he still helps the Heroine's problems...... I hope that Queen Milaine can be the main waifu 😂 well... I don't care what matters is I'm looking forward to the storyline