Review Detail of alecb in TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

I might be a little harsh, butt the writing lowers everything, and not because of the usual reasons. The real problem is not the language, but the sentence construction. The author is probably aiming for some kind of flowery prose, but it just doesn't work. Reading this is a decoding exercise. And it came to the point that most of the time, the sentences end up not making sense...