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alecb26dReplied to alecbI mean when you think about it. Having a katana shaped lightsaber makes no sense at all. Lightsabers have no edge, they cut in any direction. By giving it a bladed shape, you actually make it lesser than the normal ones
(A/N If you want another name for the MC then tell me. Vote in the comments, cause that's all I got.)- alecb26dCommented
Just remove the weeb BS
(A/N If you want another name for the MC then tell me. Vote in the comments, cause that's all I got.) - alecb3mthCommented
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"There is also a fresh and young one here~!!" - alecb3mthCommented
Please make it so. I know last chapter you said it wasn't the case, but it isn't in story so far. You already said the dreaded words: "not OP"(words that are usually said when everything points at that the MC SHOULD be OP...) But don't make it a ability that cannot grow, otherwise it's just too weak (compared to him) Especially when you gave telekinesis to a non-MC OC... OP is not an insult
"I don't know, possibly." I said. - alecb3mthCommented
It's like watching a trainwreck in slow motion... Why do you have to write Canon... If it happens the same way, don't write it in such details...
'First I will tell Cersei I know the truth about her and her children. Giving them the head start to leave the capital before I return to Robert and tell him the truth,' I think to myself as I then go to look for the Queen. - alecb3mthCommented
Alright, this is where I'm noping out
"Then remember to call me daddy next time," Damian said as he patted her head. - alecb3mthCommented
Best way to break trust, thank you for the clarity. I'm out
I had earlier taken a vote for the female lead of the fanfiction and as per the poll results it was decided that Wanda should be the female lead. However I am considering adding more girls to the fanfiction from Marvel TV series and comics. So I have decided to retake the poll, so that it can be fair for everyone.detailUnleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel UniverseMovies ¡ Story_Teller_229 - alecb3mthCommented
Wasn't that 2 days prior?
Since the day of the fight with Abomination, Bruce and Tony had gotten close too.detailUnleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel UniverseMovies ¡ Story_Teller_229 - alecb3mthCommented
It's really starting to look like you're taking any opportunity you can to prevent the plot from advancing...
Ch 35 35detailUnleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel UniverseMovies ¡ Story_Teller_229 - alecb3mthCommented
Couldn't get the first word right?
Prolog - alecb4mthCommented
Another Pedo author...đ¤Ž
Lily Frey - alecb4mthPosted
I might be a little harsh, butt the writing lowers everything, and not because of the usual reasons. The real problem is not the language, but the sentence construction. The author is probably aiming for some kind of flowery prose, but it just doesn't work. Reading this is a decoding exercise. And it came to the point that most of the time, the sentences end up not making sense...
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It's really becoming unbearable...
Hours melted unnoticed as they delved deeper into their shared history, exploring the nuances of their individuality and the threads that bound them together. Their conversation became a dance of understanding and acceptance as they bared their hearts, revealing vulnerabilities and celebrating strengths. In this sacred space of connection, the walls that once separated them crumbled, replaced by a bridge of empathy and unconditional love. - alecb4mthCommented
Listen mate, Honestly, I don't want to read the chapter of this is all this is about. But more than that, why the F do you keep insulting your readers?
A/N: This chapter will contain my first sex scene of the story. I hope you enjoy it my fellow degenerates, because there will be many more to follow before this fic is completed. - alecb4mthCommentedCh 37 Alexandria and a heart attack.
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Why? It makes no sense at all!
- Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. (Season 5) - alecb4mthCommented
Stop it with the "BOOMS"! It's getting really annoying!
Suddenly, "BOOMMM!!!", the purple light exploded with a loud boom, and the purple energy was released outward with a powerful blast. - alecb4mthCommented
Why?
"Alright.! Alright.! You two stop being all mopey for once, and concentrate on the task at hand. I hope I don't have to explain to you of it's great, future, historical significance all over again.!", Kol completely ruined the sentimental mood as he interjected. - alecb4mthCommented
And yet you somehow managed to make it boring. Congratulations
Kol was in a good mood. The feeling of flying was exhilarating. He could never get enough of it. - alecb4mthCommented
Lost me at the use of '&'. Seriously, is 'and' a complicated word to write?
The prospect of life after death was always a little hard for me to believe. I mean do souls really exist or are we a purely biological & physical being. I never thought I would ever get the answer for this but life has a way of surprising us or screwing us over.